
why is the story line kinda..cringe?

agreed, I just caught up after dropping for a while. i feel like the story so far has been poorly written and not even for the sake of smut, it just seems like middle school wattpad level quality right now. I feel like the buildup could use some work. I was hoping it would improve after I came back but its the same lol
Guys i think the ML also hypnotized the guy in the blue jacket because the MC was saying how he has never joined any group projects before but weirdly he joined that specific one where junghwi is in. And i know its fucked up but i HOPE it’s him that doing the boom bayah with junghwi cause im dropping this shi if it was the ML, like how sick can u be to fuck the dude he’s jealous of,the literal boyfriend of his alleged “brother” that he’s weirdly obsessed with(i know he’s hypnotized and all but STILL)