It's too... Childish? Not in a way that it's written by an amateur, I really respect the time, effort, and the beauty of the story itself.
It's just targeted to a much younger audience. Teenagers, I mean. I am a young adult who read stories like these in elementary and read rated stories by high school, trust me, I've grown tired of it now for my early exposure.
I just can't enjoy it anymore now that I've been... Woke. Also, the main characters are kids. They'll make love and give me r-rated scenes but I'd still see them as children. I'd actually prefer it if they look a lot older or THEY literally get older. Like, with the dad's age.
In any case, I'm dropping this at it's climax. I enjoyed it while I read it but I would really love it if I transmigrate in this story myself and romance the dad. I mean, come on. He's too hot to stay single
I feel the same. It's not just the plot, but the art itself I find it very cutesy unlike other more matured-targeted audience. I guess I can tell it apart from the way brighter colours are used, frills decorations, and all that blinding effect.
I hate them both so much. They're both big idiots! But I'mma read anyway because they're MY idiots.
It's good if I read this 5 years ago. It's just too bland for my tastes right now. I'm just looking for drama. But the art and plot is beautiful
So, I got bored again. I've read several different stories whilst reading this until I finally put it on hold.
I really loved the context. This spin-off is so good I wanted to read more. I mean, looking at the world of MHA in the perspective of a much older character with a smaller chance to make it as a hero makes it more interesting ti read.
Honestly, I loved it. The only thing that kept me from it is the fact that the story is not loyal to a single character or at least just the main characters. They included the backstories of several characters that were from the original MHA and I prefer them to be included to the original series and segregate from the spin-off. At least that's how I feel.
I just prefer this story to focus on Yoichi's. I really want to see how far he'll go but the pacing is too slow for me to consider it.
I'll be back if I feel like it again. I really love this story and hope to explore more of the original series through it too. In small and decent amounts at the very east.
The art is okay, the smex scenes were not it for me with those ahegaos. But the plot was decent too. It would've been good had they made it to 10 or 12 chapters at least.
Too bad the chapters are barely loading so I had to stop at ch. 131. Though I already skipped to the last chapter.
They should update this! I want to see their romance! Proposal! Marriage! Family!
I want to read it so bad
I was prepared to read drama and toxic people, only to be hit by a fluffy wholesome love story.
Why is this soo adorable
I mean, I never expected to be this invested upon entering this story but it was too good not to!
I love the art, it's so beautiful and the hot spicy scenes were so muah . The character designs were also good, sometimes I see Hodaka (Seme) as BJ Alex. Like, next level character designs!
I love the concept. Is it a demonverse now? I don't know what it's called but it's SO GOOD! The plot is interesting and they delivered the idea well. So well that I felt it was too short and wanted more. I hope to be able to see them in their adulthood! And possibly have kids too .
Still hoping for more. I'll be back the next time they update. I mean, we're now at the point of their relationship where they take it to the next level of depth and commitment, and I'm here for it!
I love art. So beautiful, so enchanting! I also loved the character designs. They made their kid have his father's hair and eye color but his face is basically a clone of his mother. They made sure he still got his mom's genes despite how his father's was a more dominant one.
It's also fascinating how the FL looked exactly like her mother. And how she passed that beauty to her child as well. A pretty dominant gene in that aspect. Can't wait to see how their second baby looks. I bet it's a girl who looks exactly like her mother but with her dad's personality. A girl version of her brother but more outgoing than him. Though it's safe to say that Theo's got his dad's aura of authority, perfect for a ruler, and his mom's elegance and cleverness.
Anyway, I've been reading this since it came out. One of the few stories that I followed up on without letting it marinate till over 70 chapters. And I have to say, it's been fun. I've been obsessed with these kinds of tropes. The couple hooks up, they break up (mostly the guys do the breaking), MC gets pregnant, keeps quiet about it, goes as far away as possible, then time skips to the ex finding them and spends the rest of the chapters winning them over. Even read other genres with the same plot, it does not get boring .
I do love seeing the ex regretting and doing the chasing, but I think I love watching the MC just living, thriving even, by themselves and without the ex's help.
Other than that, I stayed for Theo, and also for the hot men here. Can you believe, that I fell for the 2nd ML and his dad? Like, did you see how hot the father was when he kidnapped the FL's dad and slowly killed him?! Okay, a little dark, but you get what I mean!
I was like, either I marry the young and fit Servel, or I have an affair with his hot dad Marquis Ecklen. Either way, I marry into their family