
It more than just being gross. As a woman reading this is actually filling me with dread and Iām not the type to be shaken up easy. I dunno if this is the authorās intention or if itās just a r*pe fantasy but she wrote perfect domestic violence victim and I get chills every chp because this could really be anybody.
Iām gonna keep reading it because I hope he can escape and I really want to see that for him but⦠wow Iāve never felt actual fear not even for the uke but just imagining myself in that situation terrifies me.

I genuinely donāt think the author knows what she wants. The story definitely has potential but the mcās motivations keep flip flopping and the other characters are pretty much 2D. You can give us a character plotting to gangrape another and then make their filler fluff. Had he been manipulative/love-bombing at the start at least we take away the ācutenessā of the relationship. Even now if you showed me the last few chps I would have never guessed that one is plotting revenge and the other is a pos.
Out of the pan into the fire