no wonder it was their first comic, the story was fine but the story telling SUCKS ASS
the perspectives are messed up, why are we skipping words that need to be communicated here?! both MC are still....weirdos? wanna be deep, can't be deep. Yijo not wanting to date because he...what??? exactly???? what was that about Myojin's parents???
WAS UNNECESSARY!
This was soft, i love this for them but being nearly kidnapped to be possibly sex trafficked, the sister in law preying on him, Tsubame being victim to a literal sexual assault, how is this needed in any fictional work exactly?! Especially for it to be brushed off SO easily?! STOP NORMALIZING NOT CARING ABOUT IT!!!
so i'm re-reading this because i need the wholesomeness; there seem to be a lot of allusion made to "stars", right?
- Haebeom's store is called Byul byul, which means Star star,
- Haebeom said he'll come up with a stellar name, which is a hint tbh
- Sung Ho explained how his name means star (with the chinese character of his name)
- that one time they went to see the stars & kissed fr fr
IN ANY CASE, Byul. meaning Star. suits her very well. me think.









And it's still weirdly enjoyable lmao
What's Zeo being a brat for?!