
they should develop lady yeon's story like her guard's - not focusing on her romantic feelings but on herself, her growth etc. the way things are going, it's like yeon's life revolves around the the demon lord
nway, i think murim stories work better when people are just desperate to get stronger. maybe i just like their despair :(

i was hoping yohan would bite :(
ps: i have a feeling they used to have more deep talks during the manhwa and maybe now the author is only focused on the smut part therefore jay is acting crazy and talking bout sex out of place?? cuz i kinda remember them being vulnerable. but ofc that can be all fabricated memories lol
i always thought ms kim saw in mokhwa what she _wanted_ her brother to be so she gonna be in awe when he comes back~(≧∇≦)
(considering she's not a betrayer as u guys are implying. which would break mine and mokhwa's heart btw)