
The story litrally went from A to Z , its an interesting story but its just too sudden and the choice of characters personality is just too cliche. But still a nice work though.

I definitely agree with you there. The first chapter alone could have been expanded to three to build adequate tension and to get to know the characters. There were a lot of miscommunications and there wasn’t enough breathing room in between for the characters to process them and react. It made the whole thing feel rushed. I do definitely like it, and the art is lovely, but there are some things that break the spell of reading. It just seems that the author had so many ideas that they liked and crammed them in to convey with not enough space to explore them.

Life lesson #?? : never drink anything that is given by your boyfriend's/girlfriend's previous lover, 75% of them are crazy and have a 50/50 chance that they would poison your drink for the reason of stealing their lover away from them even though it is clear that their relationship was not working out at all.
Fark, I could feel the embarrassment reaching into my guts and my soul. xD))))