Anon September 11, 2025 5:18 pm

I like this story but I find the dialogue a bit stilted, so the characters kind of come off as somewhat inconsistent. I guess there isn't a whole lot of internal dialogue either, except a few thought bubbles, probs adds to the issue.

Also lol @ them having to climb up a ladder to a hovering helicopter.

Anon August 20, 2025 2:26 pm

I'd be soo fkn salty if I got hired as a celebrity body guard and was then expected to reenact the full christopher nolan dark knight special. Didn't know we needed a whole fkn armada out here.

This story is so wack, there's NO CONTEXT provided ever lol.

    Stonks August 20, 2025 2:44 pm

    Context is probably in the novel?

    azoro August 20, 2025 2:45 pm

    Well it's definetly over the top, but many things are left random bcz it's from a novel (but I don't much as I haven't read it)

    Anon August 20, 2025 3:27 pm
    Context is probably in the novel? Stonks

    Hm, so generally when making a body of work you'd likely want to explicitly direct your reader to the original text if it's required. Or, just translate the story more effectively, so the context is uh, on the pages.

Anon April 6, 2025 4:08 am

A bit rogue of me, I've literally just started this story. But I've noticed that when stories like these are written by Korean authors they seem to struggle with conceptualising multiculturalism or like the diaspora experience because of they've never experienced a non homogenous context. Also SK doesn't allow dual nationality lol.

This isn't even about this story in particular haha, just something I've noticed. Just someone being born and raised in Canada is also Canadian, not just a Korean who's now chosen to move 'home'. I just feel like there's an undercurrent of assumed nationalism, that I think people who've experienced otherwise may not inherently develop. And not just SK, but I notice it with loads of countries particularly those which require mandatory military service e.g., Singapore (the propaganda is crazzzy in singapore), Israel, SK etc.

    XEIJAM April 6, 2025 4:17 am

    frr like isnt canada also his home

Anon June 10, 2024 2:29 pm

POV of being buried alive

Anon April 20, 2024 3:24 am

The author struggles with developing meaningful endings, they're so weirdly timed and the mc's feelings and behaviours never match the context.

Anon March 25, 2024 11:08 pm

You know, these stories make a lot of sense when you frame them around the concept of 'what would someone with the emotional capacity of a toddler do?'

    AWinterWonderLand March 26, 2024 8:39 am

    Toddlers don't try to create codependency, tie you down, and threaten to lock you up.

Anon December 22, 2023 7:12 am

I honestly love any scene involving their families. Like it has such unhinged energy.

Anon December 12, 2023 9:07 am

omg merry christmas everyone <3 what a treat

Anon November 23, 2023 9:57 am

Idk Dan's behaviour seems consistent with a diagnosis of dependent personality disorder.

Anon November 23, 2023 9:43 am

Yes homosexuality is criminalised in many places, mostly within western and north Africa countries and some places within Asia irl. It usually occurs in countries that are culturally conservative and have an enmeshment of religion and government. Is that the setting of this story? I find it fkn weird this author would implement it like it's a funny plot point for mc to move out and not a depiction of legitimate systemic hardcore discrimination. Oh but its ~fiction~, fkn please.

    Sazz November 23, 2023 11:23 am

    My point exactly lol Not to mention the completely stupid interactions, the blackmail scene was laughable.

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