
Are people in these comments really saying SA was deserved? As if Seth wasn’t getting raped before his fall? As if EVERY sexual encounter he’s had in this story hasn’t been forceful? “The men raped women while Seth was in power therefore Seth deserved to get gang raped” HUH?? Every single god in this story has raped, forcefully molested, or used manipulative tactics on seth to get what they want. Should horus get gang raped for raping Seth? The bearded guy? Isis for watching it and not helping but instead plotting revenge against Seth? These comments are crazy.

I do like this story but the tension is nonexistent. Everyone who works at the org is a big joke, those people are not a threat at all, the revenge plot was dropped immediately and both of the couples are a bit too similar for my liking.
It’s a shame because I see the potential and with a little reworking it could be a great story.

I couldn’t figure out what was not hitting for me, despite the fact that I keep feeling compelled to read it and I think you hit the nail on the head! The tension builds, then instead of expelling or coming to conclusion the tension dissolves almost immediately after it starts! It’s like the authors wanted a cool scary plot and a fluffy plot and a crime plot and forgot all of them partway through
The artist uses that blond background girl with her hand in her skirt pocket in so many crowd shots lol