
This is good and has a lot of funny bits, but I'm really tired of having 30+ (or in this case 100+) aged people forced into high school just because they look young. It makes me uncomfortable that they're being embroiled in love webs with teens who are basically children compared to them from all angles and perspectives.
It would have been so easy to just have him be twenty and state that he has a baby face.

Ah damn, wasn't expecting that. So Ronan is likely more intrinsically connected to the "starlight" thing than even he knew. He's not just a left behind extra, he's been purposely handicapped so that he won't be able to interfere with the future events. Although that makes me wonder. If it was insidious by nature, then why "sorrow" and why this work-around when they could have outright killed him as a baby? Make it's more of a lock-and-chain sort of business instead? To keep him hidden? A weird way of protecting? Cause it's not like Ronan was extremely weakened by it. He's still OP despite being cursed.
Very interesting. I can't wait to see where the story goes with this mystery.

Every time I read a translation like this I feel like I'm having a stroke. I don't mind MTL, but how hard is it to give a quick proofread?
I like the MC. I feel like the story could have done more with her character concept considering she was essentially a child soldier in her past life.
I actually don't mind that the Duke is (unwillingly) sharing his body with another soul. It's like she has two dads which I dig. Again, the execution of the idea is a bit poor. There's so much they could be doing with it but well instead *waves hand at story*

Dude's existence is enough to pull aggro. What is he a twelve year that got betrayed for the first time? What kind of nonsense is he spouting?? And the mage chick, "this dungeon is beneath me " Get out of here with that. The MC and his guildmaster boo seem to be the only likeable characters? bruh no, this sucks. I like the concept, and the MC's power is real cool. I hope the story improves from here.
Unbelievably adorable.