
Hmmm its interesting but maybe its because the way the artist executed the story it feels lacking but it is still interesting, it has a very good potential so I am looking forward for the update. The art is nice but the expression is lacking yet thanks to the dialogues I kind of got the grasp what the character is feeling hoping the artist keeps up and also continue to improve!! The author is also good but there are some things that is so confusing but I managed to grasp it after thinking about it for a few minutes lololol but still its a good story, average execution (not good nor bad, just fine) and Im looking forward for both the artist and the author!!!
#lovelovelove

Oh my I also think so! The art is cute and really pretty the base story line is also super unique and interesting but I feel like there are to many clichés and not enough inner monologues. Many character apart from the fl seem flat and heir enemy / competition is just a bratty kid she isn't even truly evil just a snoty brat that was used for the schemes of the grown ups and even those don't seem like the ultimate villian they are just selfish and kinda stupid none of their schemes even worked out for a second everyone knew she was the real daughter.
All in all its still interesting and super unique as you said! And I hope the portraition of the story gets more depth~

But thank god! Im so happy someone managed to understand what I meant, I was scared that someone could misunderstand my intentions. I am not from any Western countries, Im asian but its true English is my first language but I kind of like forgot how to use words or things like that so whenever I talk or chat with someone people tend to misunderstand me bcs the way I use my words is very misleading--at least thats what they say.

Ngl I kinda still want them to suffer after making the OG Bunnie suffer when the truth is she is the victim but they didnt bother to listen to her. I mean yea I understand them wanting blame someone bcs their loved one was seperated from them but still, its not an excuse and have the audacity to seek love, care and attention from that person who you hurt the most. I mean Im glad FL is well nice but not too nice (at least) but still her nice is kinda somewhere between the average nice and too nice which is I kinda feel like she is going easy on people who hurt her anddd I know some of yall are gonna say "She wasnt" or smth but just like I said, its probably me being petty and childish...plus I kinda love it when MC is like guilt-tripping the people who hurt them cause its SATISFYING ASF

She forgot about the corrupted holy bow or smth bcs of black magic...she didnt even think about getting the sword back, the wolf even mentioned that getting all the corrupted weapons or smth can end the world...I mean I understand she can forget that because you know emotions can get in your way sometimes whether you like it or not and humans tend to forget things so its understandable its just... FRUSTRATING
Interesting but I want to see our baby Raphel I MISS HIM ALREADYYY