But I can't help but feel uneasy with the children she raised who will feel romantic feelings towards her. And I know the ML would be the grand priest but still, WHY THE CHILDREN???? I mean they are no longer children and the gap between her and the kids she raised are probably around 8-10 years bur still???
"She is acting like a child when she is literally like an adult mentally"
STFU it's the system who made her act that way. Also, she didn't have an amazing childhood in her past life and when she received the things she wanted before she acts like a child. It's the same as the adults for goodness sake, if you yearn for something and when you finally get it you literally act like a child.
"but she has died once why is she still scared??"
Uh, because she is a human???? Plus just because she died once doesn't mean its not scary to die twice. Also think about it, trauma. WHO WOULDN'T BE CLSCARED IF THEY HAVE TRAUMA?? WHERE THE FUCK IS YOUR BRAINCELLS???? This is why ppl should sleep on time to not lose their braincells.
"Why is she so dumb asf even though she has the ability to see one's emotions and thoughts??"
Being dense and dumb are VERY DIFFERENT from each other. FL is dense, she can't tell that there would be some people who would feel that way towards her. In her past life, she has no experiences in love so ofc she would be dense. If you have not experienced something, of course you wouldn't know about it, like her having trauma thinking that the current lofe she lives is just a dream and the fear of death. You can understand it when you haven't even experienced it. THATS HOW IT IS.
"I'm dropping this it's so bor--"
Did we ask for you to stay??? DID WE ASK FOR YOUR OPINION!?? NO RIGHT? THEN LET ME TELL YOU SMTH, YOU LETTING US KNOW THAT YOU'LL DROP THIS MANHWA IS COMPLETELY IRRELEVANT. THATS RIGHT, IRRELEVANT. That's why, keep it to yourselves. These mfs think the world is spinning around them. What a delulu.
Finally regretting it now? Keep it up. That ain't enough for what you did to him. Keep suffering, you bitch.
They should just put tragedy here...
Tragedy for plot
Tragedy for potential
Tragedy of their love
Tragedy literally fits this manhwa the best.
I was listening to the music and then when Karuna came back I was about to say, "Our babygirl is backkkk" but instead the current music's chorus interrupted me singing, "DADDY'S HOME~HOME FOR YOU~"
I agree that this story is good but the way it is executed and the storytelling (or maybe its the translations) its bad. I mean not that bad to the point I couldnt understand a word, no. What I mean is, its so bad that I dont feel the thrill, the excitement, I dont feel any emotions from it. Well except to the part where she and her family were distant, I could feel the pain a little, but still not good.
For the translators/scanlators: kindly execute the storytelling a little better, even if its not the BEST, I just want to feel the emotions from the story. I know some of the others here will comment, "Then how about supporting the author instead and read the official translations instead of complaining?" First of all, I am not complaining. I am requesting for the trans/scanlators to make it a little better. Second of all, I just want them to improve it a little bit more and use the right words for the storytelling in order for some readers like me to experience the emotions. And lastly, I am broke which is why I am reading the manhwa here, and this manhwa has a potential only to be lessened by the lack of right words in this translations. And I am not saying that trans/scanlators arent doing their best to their works, I am actually proud of their works and I support them too, I am just requesting for them to improve it.
The fairy who was with MC most of the time wasnt given an introduction so Idk their name huhuuu
Idk family trees are confusing cause isnt Haruto, the omega boy, Alpha MC's younger brother? And The other kid who is an alpha, the Omega MC's son? So there are possiblities that Alpha MC adopted the omega MC's son then what does it make Haruto to that Alpha boy?
I want to take the conflicts srsly but I just cant bcs after that depressing ass scene follows a funny scene and I just cant take it too srsly ╥﹏╥
Its been serializeddddd
Not that I have read this story's novel but I had a few glimpse of its plot and I swear its goodddd just waiting for it to be webtoonized for a different impact(づ￣ ³￣)づ
I love the story but at some point, the way the author executed it is around maybe if we could rate it from 1-10 then approximately around 5. If only they chose the right words it could have added 2 more points. And if they delivered the right emotions well, it should add 3 more points. So the total of points is now 10. Maybe because the author is new, that is why the story is still around 5 points, which is thats actually a good start for a newbie. Plus listening to some very helpful criticisms from their readers, and some guidance they could gain new experiences and lessons. So looking forward to their new projects in the future, if they plan to continue make new ones.(づ￣ ³￣)づ
Its not entirely the best but it is enough to make my heart crumble when their relationship turned to dusts