
i want to see what people say to defend her this time. she's disagreeing with their relationship because she suffered parental neglect? the fuck that has got to do with them

First of all I do not agree with her like at all. I think her point tho is more that she suffered of being an "abnormal" person and envying "normal" people and their life. I *think* she just doesn't want that kind of life for the men as many people still sadly see homos as abnormal. Ig from her point of view this makes sense but like it's still a crazy take

their dialogue is so incredibly awkward and flat that it doesn't flow and didnt interest me, just made me hella bored

the story and plot itself is good, but the dialogue is uninteresting at best. and that's what makes or breaks a story; the dialogue between the MCs. now anyways, i thinks it's best you just leave this conversation because you obviously dont know how to refute an opinion without adding in your own conjured up implications

my apologies, miss/mr. as my excuse, i thought you are just one of the kind i am always have argue about having problems with harmless story but always romanticize and hyping the one that have the issues i have mention above. anyway, for me. it’s not really boring. it’s kind of deep dialogue about romance, a one-sided and etc. You can always leave in silence if you don’t want it, if it bored you. I’m not saying that you have no right to comment, of course you have. However, it is better to have a little courtesy to appreciate the author way of writing or anything? (fancy me saying when I read illegally but i’m broke)

nah bro im free to critique the story on actual faults. they just kept responding with "yeah.. ok" and that's dry and incredibly awkward to read, especially between two people in a relationship. the uke in practicular spoke like an awkward 13 year old. and while i do get that some people do so irl regardless of age, maybe the author wanted to portray that here, it just wasnt executed properly. it fell flat and didn't have any depth. the casual dialogue didnt keep me hooked
omm i need a freak like him