It felt very fast paced and rushed and I half-thought the story was a non fantasy and that the guy wasn't a vampire but just the delinquent being very dumb and when the vampire turned into a wolf I legit thought he was just a werewolf and was going to correct the delinquent. T hey rush the romance and have it be they fell in love because "sex" which is normal for yaoi and it starts off kinda maybe-rapey-normal yaoi slop. I'll give it points for having a taller, buffer uke with hairy legs that acts like a brute for most of the story and a confident collected quiet sleek seme. But most of the extra side stuff is just the vampire getting horny while the uke acts like a himbo and it feels like the uke is into the seme one sidedly while the seme is only in it for the sex from what has been shown as they don't really "date" persay just get horny over each other.
The side couple chapter was so jarring and out of place I damn near thought the uke was a pretty woman and was somewhat disappointed because yaoi typically ignores heterosexual pairings and yuri pairings and it would've been a nice change of pace to the norm but alas I shouldn't critique it for not going against the grain. I was very offput by the side couple because they had nothing to do with the main couple not relatives, not classmates and not even the bare minimum of having one of them be a vampire (I skimmed the thing they were childhood friends so likely not a vampire)
I'm tired of this racist fetishizing orientalist stereotyping bullshit plus pure innocent white snow savior innocent virgin FL who gives her virginity to ML.
Cover made me think it was just some sexy werewolf shit or cool black haired ML this is weird "beastly race" (not using a real race because that would be racist but we're definitely talking about THAT race *wink**wink)
I stopped reading around the dream jumping bullshit because things were starting to get convoluted and complicated for no god damn reason so do we stop the dream jumping bullshit and just not ever do it again or do we keep seeing her jump into dreams?
I don't wanna celebrate his birthday. a birthday is a thank you for existing. He had done nothing worth celebrating no redeeming qualities no self reflection just garbage.
Not sure if it was just a promo or the prologue but basically rich noblewomen with light orange/orange hair is lovers with a black haired knight and implied sex. Then a saintess or some light haired/platinum blonde girl comes in and I don't know if it was after or before they completed their quest but knight breaks up with her and she's devasted but I think she goes back in time(?). It had a really moody art style with grey shadows and stuff.
"I'm in love with him" BUT WHY ALL HE DID WAS KISS YOU ONCE IF ANYTHING THAT'S SEXUAL HARASSMENT!! ALL HE'S BEEN DOING IS SEXUAL HARASSMENT!! I cry with great anguish and confusion. Just go with the dragon who hasn't tried to rape you and doesn't have a harem he must breed. Y'know love interests who start off shitty usually have to off an unshitty side of themselves like being kind, caring or helpful but all this guy does is walk around loking "pretty".
He's also not even that attractive he's trying to have the charm and elegance of Howl from "Howl's moving castle" but he's not as complex or interesting nor is he charming and elegance he just looks like a girl and has a constant boner for no apparent reason other than "he finds shion hot".
When will they stop mentioning the pubes the artist doesn't draw pubes on any of them if I wanted to imagine different types of shaven, trimmed and untrimmed pubes I'd read a novel becauseOMG they're all shaven even the seme is shaven smooth. The magic system and thing energy is very poorly explained like "this one's bad but also too much of this one is bad what do they use it for .... Fighting(?)".
Bitch looks either anorexic or like a child but they give her a normal sized head so her body looks even weirder in comparison also "thin neck and voluptious breasts" what voluptuous breasts are you talking about bitch is damn near flat. They make her so small next to him not in a "she's a short thin lady" way but in a "she's pprepubescent/shes just started puberty" way. Also tits are drawn poorly and stiffly her "thick thighs" are also so still they just look like bones.
The comments are starting to feel like the comments of Jinx.
Also starting to hate the annoying daughter I wouldn't be upset if she was killed off for drama and conflict. Before you say it yes she's a kid and kids are annoying little shits but they're also supposed to be cute and endearing in their stupidity she is just annoying and spoiled no charm. I only like bill, dietrich and dietrich's wife.
This feels like it's either written by a man or a dumb woman with how it writes sex, relationships, romance and women.
Just read "JK haru is a sex worker" if you want to read about a powerless high school girl getting thrust into another world where the only way to make money for her is sex work where she actually likes her coworkers and her coworkers are nice to her. She actually ends up falling in love while working and it's the first time she truly enjoys sex with a client rather than phoning it in or it just being mediocre. There's also class disparity and sexism so she can't go out during daytime without being scrutiized by passerbys. Also no overpowered mary sue MC she's legit powerless, doesn't have that much money, sexism exists so no social power and she gets roughed up by clients who like it rough. She has to do what she can to take care of the people she cares about her coworkers, other women and clients that are kind to her which is hard to do because she's so powerless and sometimes they save her when she's been good to them. Minor spoilers but at some point a high ranking soldier comes into the brothel and makes her suck his in the middle of the tavern part of the brothel using other lower ranking soliders to block her so he doesn't get forcing her head down and there's nothing her pimp boss can do because he's so high ranking. Then when a client who's never paid for her sex just asked for conversation while paying her every time finally buts in and offers a crap ton of money for sex with her and to get her out of the sticky situation. So she gladly does it with him because of his money and how sweet and cool it was to save her but she's not in love with him just thinks he's a cute admirable guy. Also he's a chubby shy guy who's a chef so not fatphobic as well.
Tldr just read "JK haru is a sex worker in another world" if you want a story that does good representation of sex workers because sex work is still work.
Asa already doesn't like herself too much as is and she always gets in her head about what other people think of her and now she's worried she looks like a slut to other other people primarily Denji. Her feelings of self hate are overpowering her feelings of "ew sex".
Denji keeps getting fucked up and it just keeps happening and he keeps falling into a pit.
I thought the girl would get a monster harem as a way to get that "falling in love" wish to come true
I also wished she falls in love with a random nice guy or the yuri route. I hoped the "hero" would be shit at sex and she'd have to couch both the hero and the concubine through their first sex by telling him to be gentle and patient with her while praising and soothing the virgin girl. This feels like missed potential.
Revenge plot is interesting and I'm invested but ML is really boring and shitty with the sexual harassment and harsh attitude I don't find him charming and am not amused by him also the "kissing the foot tradition" thing was weird for the writer to add and feels like fetish bait. The FL feels like she's both infantilsed and also like she's being set up for girl bossing like she's babied by everyone except when it's about sex. Emotional complexity and nuance is thrown away in this revenge story in exchange for your regular one dimensional villains but they introduce so many of them and all of them have dark hair so it makes it confusing as all hell to tell the difference between the evil sister in law, evil stepmother, evil stepfather, evil mother in law, evil mistress and evil husband plus the plot moves really fast so they aren't established all too well. Plus the "ML giving mindblowing sex to FL" is overdone make him bad at sex or OK at sex and not hyperbolicly good at it because everyone has different tastes and "being good at sex" is about decent communication ( The Private Report on My Lesbian Experience with Loneliness was a manga that handled it really well) and these two have none of that for fucks sake she can't even tell when he's joking and is uncomfortable around him (also they do that thing where they bluntly state that the ML is hot because artist can't draw that plus it's used as an excuse for ML to be shitty) all their interactions feel so awkward and stilted and are so uncomfortable to read that I just wanna speed through them but I know that there's plot stuff there but I just want it to be over already but he keeps coming back.
TLDR: I hate shitty sexually harassment ML who "respects women" and I want a new one (perhaps a himbo) because I can't take it anymore.
Child lether looks horrible because the artist can't draw children it's obvious at close ups, child hands etc.
I love the translator's notes and "meme"'s inserted at the end of every chapter. I appreciate the info on the translations and the liberties taken to make the story comprehensible. I appreciate the meme's because this is a pile of stink hot doodles with an art style equivalent to classic shoujo version of a lisa frank piece so having someone point it out immediately after each chapter is refreshing and relieving that someone else GETS IT.
I want the OG Mako to come back from the dead to take transmigration Mako's place and fix this shit. I know this is supposed to be self-insert as Mako but I just hate this guy. This ain't no true Yandere if his love was so strong and devoted he wouldn't want a substitute but only revival of the true version of her he would only want her not some substitute that doesn't even know him. He loved Mako because she cared about him and they spent time together. He doesn't love AU Mako but he needs some form of Mako like a bandage on a wound that will never heal. This feels ick I want him and OG Mako together.
Does anyone else wish the artists were/could be linked on some strories with separate artists and authors. Like so often I'm like "the art is so pretty let me check out other works by the same person" completely different art style.
