Great start, awful carrying, the dialogues were hard to understand and switched up halfway through, the fl is a carpet getting walked over no spine whatsoever. The plot should've emphasised her revenge more yet she got with a dude not even 30 chaps in
I wished they delved into the fight more and her past, to think that it ended without him knowing that she was 500 yrs old and previously in love with his ancestor lol
How tf was he carrying that huge onahole toy around without anyone noticing like where in what was he even carrying it, or did he just wear it like a cock sleeve all around??
He didn't offer his son as an experiment, he's trying to keep his father away from doing it to the baby, that's why he withheld information but somehow and through someone the father found out.
Jokes aside I fw this hard, I'm sick of gls that lack drama and this gave drama and hot girls
This dude is too addicted to sex I wanna see the game progress bruh and he's ruining it all
Cuz remember, the demons are targeting our uke bc they know that he's there, so he doesn't want that, I don't think he'd feed on anyone else he's balls in deep
But so rushed, I wish I was a bit longer with more clarification


















