
Is everyone in this story 5’3 lol? I was so focused on their short torsos that I could barely pay attention to the story, and when I did it was lwk not that amazing. Like many other short manga, it overuses the ‘wow’/‘shock’ factor. There’s not enough buildup, but you can’t blame author for that. With only 6 chapters you can’t really get to all the plot points you planned with the proper amount of filler so it’s gonna seem a little fast paced. I don’t think it was a terrible story, but it definitely wasn’t the best

Probably controversial but I lowkey wish the author would focus more on mitsuaya than joanna like we only get 4 pages a chapter, I’m just tired of the constant dragging of the zero communication trope I get it’s more realistic to have both problems happening at the same time, but in a perfect world, they happen one after the other so we get at least some sort of resolution
Half the chapter being her opening presents is a little annoying, but seeing her affectionate in the second half was worth it. I just wish all the big stuff would happen already so she can live happily with them it feels like it’s stalling