The story has ended and this is considered the bonus chapters????! this feels like the story hasn’t ended and this is a continuation than bonus chapters-I still need more from them after this ends. I want to know how they will really learn to live with each other and lee won will be able handle this. I love that lee won is not afraid to punch the shit out of Cesar at times(very well deserved)
Please I’m begging the heavens here GET A BETTER WRITER. The story is pure shit. The art is pure nearly perfect I love Chinese period setting and the characters always look so good, drawn so well(the smut too) but oh my god somebody save them from this crappy ass writing. It’s like a 14 freak with some weird kinks write it. Please stop this mess and hire a good writer. They would be doing a lot for the community if they did. I beg you. I want 10 more of these(if the writing is good)
The fact that there really is no second couple here. I just kept waiting and waiting and nothing happened between the helmet guy n the doc. U know what. Whatever. Ig the artist really did want to focus on the main couple which is fine. The babies and dogs are drawn so adorable. I wish in some moments the dialogues were written better and less confusing and had more depth. It’s fine tho.
I don’t want to be the one complaining but Sometimes the smut gets repetitive too. If they focused on the plot more, we could have shortened this manga to one less year and still had people wanting more because I mean the art is beautiful and the artist is absolutely skillful but if you gotta know when it’s too much. I loved the cute moments from here. The characters are all well made. The story should have stuck and focused more on the action and plot like it kinda did when it started.
no i agree a little. this story has such an interesting world and concept. but i've noticed that in stories like this one (and i would argue Hungry Soul as well) where the world the story is in is pretty fascinating BUT there's always an issue it's either:
a.) lack of character development
b.) lack of emotional believability
c.) a rush for smut. bc of either point a and/or b already occurring in the story authors will just rush to as much smut as possible to keep readers. which ends up biting them back imho bc now they need to find a way to complete the series and world they built which leads to less smut scenes which leads to readers being 'bored'







Mf should have at least asked for his permission before he bulldozed his place he’s such a red flag(but I love him with my entire heart) fuc. The pose was already beautiful and great ….the close up to the face yeh I crashed out. I can’t believe they’re gonna be roommates oh my god.