Everything I said in my review still holds. I forgot the plot, came back for a reread and felt the exact same way. If it wasn’t for Ren I would’ve lowered it to 1 star. I’m just not fkn with Asuza raping Kaede like that. Just tainted the rest of the story for me. Maybe if there was more backstory of them as kids cause that seems like a lot was cut out. Then home wrecker Hikaru was much also.









I’m kinda lost on the direction. Plus the emotions are all over the place. There’s no rapport. I just don’t LIKE these characters yet.
Exactly. They yell at each other too much sothere's no time to build their characters I'm hoping this new fear/vulnerability revealed at the end of this chapter is a turning point
Right! Give me something to care about, please…