
i am REALLY loving the way this fml is written!!!!!! instead of just letting him go like how ive seen many times, she clung onto him because she has always been clinging onto her questions, but more importantly, her hope. i think it’s her hope of finding him, of seeing him again, of being able to ask all the questions she wants to ask that has been kind of keeping her going, and we see that with how much she searched for him and asked about him to the police officer after he disappeared.
i think it’s also really endearing and telling of her character that she wants to know about how he’s been living. there’s nothing like spontaneously losing ur first love and never knowing how or why and she’s really seizing this chance to find all that out.
seeing her character written like this—especially with how she treats the other dude who’s name i dont remember bc i dont like him—is so nice and refreshing.
lmaooo not me writing an essay. ahem. anyway.

it was cute and stuff but i couldve done without the r*pe. i really hate when authors use it as a plot point when it’s truly just traumatizing for the character and doesnt ever actually get resolved or anything. (i especially hate when authors have a r*pe scene then use a sex scene between the MCs right after.) i loved the artstyle and was looking forward to the story, and i guess the author of this story handled it differently, but again, i felt like we couldve done without it.
the comment shout outs are freaking funny