The disease thing in Ch 56-57 is so weird, like why did you just tell her RIGHT IN FRONT OF a patient’s door and not when, yknow, she said she wanted to go outside? If she knew she’d probably understand the danger. Like the whole time they’re outside (Ashon & Ashtarte) the knight just told her no, no, no without revealing the reason of the danger. Ofc it’s needed to make her heal this Leon in the slums or whatever, but it’s just lazy writing and an eye-roll inducing plot device that I hadn’t realized were so common in these types of manhwa. Lazy writing: nonsensical flow of the plot, multiple convenient coincidences. Sorry for the nitpicking but fantasy manhwas really decline in terms of writing quality nowadays.
Not me trying to understand why you're so pained
If the guard had told Ash that there's a deadly disease, 100% she would have still left the house. There's no difference
He didn't tell her because there's the assumption that once she goes out peacefully, she'll be satisfied and stop asking to do it putting her out of harms way.
Unlike you, these people don't know they are characters
Calling it lazy writing isn't constructive, it's rude.
Every story has convenient coincidences dummy Why do main characters always end up where there's danger? Why does someone save the mc right when they're about to die? If these things don't happen then what are you reading?
Why I am so pained? Because I've read dozens of stories like this, most of them are so forgettable because they're like the exact copy of one another. A webtoon is not enough to be called good if it only has good art, it also has to have good writing, good paneling, pacing, and characterization. I know commenting here won't make the webtoon industry change their way, but let's be real, people will read victorian royal isekai no matter how bad it is because it's so popular. And being popular makes some company (I said company not author because Korean webtoon works differently than Japanese manga) excuse boring plotlines, dumb coincidences and conveniences, dull characters, etc. It's incredibly oversaturated, I just want to see this webtoon to not be the same as the others, because the premise is good. And I just complained about one thing for a whole series, not that it's makin me not wanna read it anymore, it's just an eye roll inducing plot device.
And you said "there was assumption", that's a lame excuse. Every story that has convenient coincidences turn out to be a mid story, anyway. And me calling it lazy writing IS me being rude, because I am so fed up with isekai manhwas not upping their quality because they know it will sell well no matter how shitty it is.
It started with a really good premise, interesting backstory and character interaction. But lately the chapters seem a bit… half-baked? Like the drawing, I scrolled past the latest chapters and it’s mostly just the characters on standing/sitting position, no creative perspective and seem a bit stiff, the pacing and paneling is so weird too, like it’s mostly just a monologue or inner thoughts for almost the whole chapter, nothing really substantial in one chapter, makes the progress a bit slow and dragging and filled with unnecessary panels, we don’t get a lot of info or closure.. I’m sorry for ranting.
Yeah, I feel the same, it's still good and interesting but the pacing for season 2 is a bit weird. I hope their doing okay and take a break if they need it.
Hahahah this is why I love Japanese BL. Nothing makes sense you're just here for that cute ass.
When will people realize that ur idol IRL will not always be nice off cam ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I need more of that Gerald glow up, one chapter is not enough. Lemme see their married life please!
If you want to use her you better be useful for her and protect her with all your power from Ravien and the gods or whatever, dickhead prince. Let’s see what you have to offer for our beautiful saintess.
I WANNA WIPE AWAY THOSE TEARSSS BABY ALEXANDRA DOESNT DESERVE THIS ┗( T﹏T )┛
Lemme know if the red princess has scenes with Nadricka again. I literally couldn't care less about the rest of the men.
Heheh the new chapter is … that
Why the double upload?
Yeah they use another name. but I don't remember that name.Σ( ￣□￣||)