
You can read the novel raws until Chapter 189 plus 3 Sidestories here
https://booktoki468.com/novel/1778043?sst=as_view&sod=desc&page=3&book=%EC%99%84%EA%B2%B0%EC%86%8C%EC%84%A4

Facination and Frustration
The automatic Google translation totally screwed up the use of pronouns.. It really irritated me, so I dropped it after the first couple of chapters ... picked it up again b/c storyoutline seemed promising...and after applying a mixture of "common sense and creativity" I got the hang of it.
And 'Yes' the seme keeps being an obsessive freak!! It was really frustrating how the uke grovels to seme and has no real 'fighting spirit'. ..
So when I was about to drop it again (~Chp70 ) the uke (and the reader) begins to notice discrepancies to the storyline from the novel he had read before transmigrating into it.
In the first third everything is told from the perspective of the MC, but it is captivating when different characters background stories are revealed.
And it gets absolutely enthralling when the seme becomes the narrator of the events that led to what happened in the beginning of the story.... so, I won't tell more since I don't want to spoil the suspense and surprise for you ;-) ;-)

If you're interested, I put together a list of mangas/manhwas which piqued my interest with link to their raws
https://www.mangago.zone/home/mangalist/2909221/
I really enjoyed reading this.. what a lovely Story