
Pretty obvious by my profile picture but I read this whole thing solely because the ML is exactly my type. The story itself is a 5.5/10 for me to be honest..the argument is kind of mid and there’s plot holes all over the place..
I could point out the several amount of unnecessary/filler actions and characters but I’m way to lazy for that. So if you’re looking for a good story this is not the one. Honestly, this storys feels like a light snack before you find an actual good one.
THAT being said, Asriel I want you to show up in my dreams, please. You’re too gorgeous.

byul is an omega? i just fell on my knees

no. that weirdo is assuming I want?????? byul???
Also, byul is not even a kid anymore. Idk how old is he but that’s besides the point. I didn’t meant it in a way that I desire (whyyy do I have to explain this) him. I wanted byul to be a BETA. How twisted your mind can be so your first thought is that someone wants a baby? wtf?
FINALLY