I quite enjoyed this but you're kind of right. I think this is a very spontaneous written story and not thought through enough... kind of like the uke, lol. I've read much worse though.
Ok I feel bad for Chiaki but DAMN this story is so much better than I expected!!!! I’m so glad they didn’t go with the classic love triangle trope bc this is way more interesting
In chapter 1, I got high hopes for the story (chapter 1 was really good). But after the seme kissed his ex, things just got kinda lame?? Still a fun read though! Not as bad as most the comments tbh
IH MY FOD LMAO THAT DAD IS MAKING HIS MOVE