
1st chap in...So basically...instead of leaving those scumbags who looked down on him cuz he was previously thought a beta...he stays with them?! Are you kidding me! Bro gets reborn & the first thing that comes out of the scum MLs mouth is "I'm the only 1 that would accept you." BIH WTF but then changes his face instantly when he gets a whiff of MCs new omega pheromones...& MC just lets him fk em??? Aight .... I'm guessing this is brainless smut with brainless plot

I love the main couple but the side couple...doc & MCs bro....I just can't really get into it...the doc puts me off...hes pretty annoying & inserts his opinions where they r not needed, he also divulges MCs medical info at the drop of a hat ...which is def immoral. overal he just comes off as a negative toxic person, literally reminds me of a Fuckboy playing with the feelings of someone who's quick to blush n get embarrassed. He def took advantage of MCs bro...MCs bro deserves better. ヽ(`Д´)ノ

ML was so precious as a baby WUT THE HEK how could they look at him & scream monster, Like his mom needed to take a look in the mirror!(/TДT)/
If I gave birth to a kid like him at most I would be like...OH shiiiet my boi has super powers...GREAT!(๑•ㅂ•)و✧.... I bet ML was obsessed with MC wn he first saw him cuz MC had glasses like the character in that book. I also bet that the guy MC thinks he "abandoned" back then is prob alive...maybe mutated? Sheesh in times of strife, war & disaster its actually realistic the things that happened so far. Cuz in times such as those inevitably there will be killing, pillaging, raiding & rape...but like oof... I hope MC doesn't experience anymore forced interactions if u know wut i mean...but this recent chap....my boi needs to wear a medieval chastity belt at this point.... ┗( T﹏T )┛

I won't lie a novel where misunderstandings are cleared up in the same chapter instead of the misunderstandings spanning an Arc or half the series is...very nice. The art is pretty decent but man the Artist has trouble drawing hands & feet like me lmao. Also the MC & ML hooked up fast I wasn't expecting that but it's also nice to see the relationship progress faster than most manga's where we barely get a kiss near the ending or something lol not to mention we actually got a warm hearted Non-toxic ML that's actually has a healthy relationship with MC n even talks out their problems instead of letting them fester...even if its a bit cliche its certainly a refreshing break from all the scummy ML's in the majority of every novel/manga I have read over the years.ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~ I wonder if ML in the OG story ended up dying in the harsh winter mentioned which is why he never showed up in the OG story?

MC: "ThiS sOuNdS lIKe A "YoU" PrOblEm MarquesS" LMAO gah damn I didnt expect her to say that. Fr though a lot of these misunderstandings could be solved if MC just bothered to tell them about the things shes seen ...you know...
SPOILERS:.......
1.Yvonne not having a DAMN REFLECTION!
2.The piece she uses for mind control
3.The fact that the enemy priestess that sucked the life out of that guy was Yvonne!
4.Apparently Yvonne's body temp is as cold as a corpse!
She could of confided to the prince & made preparations for the mind control ish especially since the prince is literally the only character that actually thinks with LOGIC & Common sense, hes blunt & able to see through Bullshit easily!(╯°Д °)╯╧╧ instead MC chooses to go down the road of self pity thinking "Whats the use of saying anything" Like girl... I get you had a hard ass life but how can people help you if you don't let them, they can't guess what your feeling all the time if you don't say it! She keeps letting the "enemys" get away with everything cuz she keeps refusing to speak up about the things shes discovered! Plus they literally have ways to deal with the mind control bs...you know MAGES! GURL I like u but hOOOOOLY shiiiii she keeps making everything 100x harder than it has to be. I get that its for the "drama & to entertain" the reader but author .... come on ...this is just getting nonsensical...(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

Honey I get that... But u have to understand how PTSD, trauma and depression does to u dude. Bc of my past, of nobody believing me no matter what I said let alone not letting saying a world, u end up with trust issues and unable to defend urself bc ur voice has been stolen... It happens again and again and u think why should I even try nobody cares. Then ur stuck in that headspace. And depressed takes over and u just wanna die. For her nobody believes her nobody helped her. And sometimes a good thing we destroy bc we cannot believe it's true based on past experiences so we end up trying to ruin a good thing bc it can't be real or "it will go bad eventually". It's not easy. As someone with depression and costs she has a very realistic view on Thoes mental illnesses it's so accurate it made me cry and remember all the times I felt that feeling in the past.

I do understand ptsd, trauma & depression, I dare say I had an even worse life growing up than this fl which is why I said those things. So going through years of understanding & experience taught me (like i said in my OG comment):
'I get you had a hard ass life but how can people help you if you don't let them, they can't guess what your feeling all the time if you don't say it! She keeps letting the "enemys" get away with everything cuz she keeps refusing to speak up about the things shes discovered!'
I had a very similar outlook on life & found shutting down n not speaking up won't help, it makes it worse. it sounds simple right? but when you go through said things it feels more complicated...until it isn't & you have that moment of realization. I may have been speaking of FL but I was also speaking on my past self as corny as that sounds. :)

Lmaooo MCs obsession with muscles kills me every time! Man so many plot twists... I truly did not expect MCs biological dad to be ...THAT guy...I truly did not...MCs mom had some horrible tastes fr...RIP. I can't wait for more chaps!! Also I hope MCs dad does find true romantic love, after all the bs he has been through in his life...He needs it & i'm sure MC would be very happy for him not to mention i'm sure she would enjoy a true mother figure in her life...& maybe some siblings like she said hehe.ლ(´ڡ`ლ) Now the wait for many chapters begins then I will binge like crazy!
Yikes the other commentors were right, The MC is very low IQ/EQ & has a huge inferiority complex when he meets other beautiful people with his master. He seriously fails to communicate with people especially ML so there ends up being so many bs misunderstandings that could be cleared up easily instead they are left to fester. ML also has communication problems & the way he treats MC is ...very questionable, I know he is the demonic sect leader & traditionally in most "evil" or demonic sects in any novel/manga they obviously do not follow the same morals that righteous sect individuals do. In regular sects your master is seen as basically a second father/mother & in exchange they raise the disciples like their own kids so if you were to engage in sexual relations it would be seen as incest/blasphemous relationship. The ML seemed to say he wanted to raise MC as a real normal disciple but then the moment he thinks MC has feelings for someone else he immediately loses it. He basically raised MC as a BF....As for their child...I have not gotten that far but the comments I am seeing talking about him......YIKES BRUHDDA( ̄∇ ̄") ...
Conclusion: If you read don't take the story to heart...its a pretty sh*t plot with 1 dimensional character wth flat personality's, I would say I prob just read as long as I did for the smut but even that wasn't really good. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍
Edit: I read the side storys....wow.... SPOILERS......
MC really just helped his son give a date rape drug to tht poor guy, instead of asking him out n just confessing bro opted for force instead...I didn't think MC would do something so low as to causing a similar situation having gone through the pain tht ML put him through. Instead of wishing a more healthy start to his kids relationship its like he wants his kids partner to be in an unhealthy relationship too, some "If I suffered then everyone will suffer" nonsense. One of those parents tht can't stand to see their child succeed where they couldn't & wants to send them down the same bloody road.
n again with the lack of communication MCs son doesn't know tht ML originally tried to abort him too & because he doesn't know that he has a similar mindset as the ML. "The whole I would never let my lover die or give birth to a child that could harm them" & never actually asking for the opinion of you know....the one actually carrying the child.Σ(  ̄□ ̄||) MCs kids personality is a mix of all the bad traits of ML & MC with a bit of your cliche Cold scumbag low EQ ML type. ML is such a hypocrite to, he said himself 'Lies only lead to more lies' & then look he goes & constantly lies to MC & his kid.(● ̄(エ) ̄●)