The story pace needs to slow down quite a bit-- so much happening at once I need a breathe and the webtoon isnt letting me. CHILL PLEASE. Touch some grass, have a walk without scheming in at least 3 panels.
MC only been there for few days and this is the first webtoon novel where the character transmigrated / reincarnated(?) making a major drastic change and everyone just goes wtf. I feel like they left a chunk amount of details especially on the characters like the prince went puppy after a chapter or 2, reminisced sibling moment but only shown like one panel, who was the one who poisoned her in the first place or the Duke who doesnt love suddenly falls for her. They introduced this betch Lydia very one dimension cannonfodder then just thrown under the bus, only once was she shown with MC (kitchen burnt scene) and was exiled after. MC talking about side characters and introducing their background character story like Vera in few panels. etc.
MC havent even been out of the palace or an outwide scene at all these 16 chapters and so many things happened. It's just. cool off.
The title itself being marionette is quickly killed off the moment she is in the princess' body. More manipulating and scheming, I like webtoons shoujo MC like this honestly but previous life and current character isnt fleshed out too well but just through words.
I'm a sucker for these kind of story dont get me wrong I love it! But it's the execution of flow makes it so rush and unsatisfying bit where they just leave it hanging, scene you wanted more or some more explanations. I would trade off the art to be less visualing if focus more on story flow smoother.
That's just my take so far I have read until chapter 16 ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
idk i prefer the fast pace vs the manhwas that drag everything out
imo this is what the norml pace of a story should be
Honestly agree but I don't hate the speed of this manhua it gives me goosebumps instead....... Also girl dude u need to chill...
Also I accidentally hit follow idk what the heck that's does though
I think so too
Better take time way down the line when is not so cliche (on the core of the story)
This is fine I can keep up, however lots of info thrown so much here like you have to know all of these by now instead of being an introduction and you just have to keep up on random information that is dropped here and there and it's piling a lot more which it gets overwhelming as a reader
Me tooo
it's a manhwa I believe
That's the effect theyre going for getting all the chills and scheming every move and the lovely drawing haha
Ngl but thot playboy characters really know how build up excitement in stories between the main couple characters ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
i didnt read description b4 reading first chapter-- that was hella good revelation!
It's like there is a very VERY THIN wall just across to have this shounen ai. so closeeeeeeeΣ( ￣□￣||)
ngl but this is very unique concept kind of isekai(???)
i can already see it coming somehow that the mastermind is the younger Prince Σ(っ°Д °;)っ
I was honestly so concern about the horses. the former fiance can fk off but im hoping the horses were ok Σ(っ°Д °;)っ
i like it! natural reaction and theyre both cute so far ^^
QUEENS CH50 ARE SLAYING ლ(´ڡ`ლ)