
The story just jumps around like it's on speed or some crazy ass drug. I hate to sound like the grammar police here, but it was truly hard reading most of this.
Now to the first girl who heads to the room with Mr. Nerd. I call bullshit on her saying that it was her first time, and guess what, Mr. Nerd, she wanted to get away from you by making up that excuse. I won't mention that alleyway sex she had because..............
The second woman who continued to fall. Either you are a bonafide klutz or you are just an attention whore.
To the man who works there; Don't you dare hurt that cute little puppy. Treat him with love. Honestly, that puppy is the best thing out of this so far.
He had a lot of guts doing that with a cop killer lol