the writing is so shit and I haven't reached the grape yet (am 20 chaps in) but fuck this shit cz why is everything so convenient and everyone's eating it up? ml is supposed to be an NIS agent but he's dumb as fuck? the dialogues suck so so so bad? everything is laid out with zero subtlety like I had to laugh cz everytime (ok like 90% of the time) zhenya pops up he's always grinning ear to ear like an idiot AND I'm supposed to believe he's monstrously strong with that 'slim' build as a 2 m man? BE SO FRRRRR everyone's eating this up for the art which I will give credit, it's pretty and all but c'mon man











oh my god I need to scream at them