WHEN DID THESE STORIES GET SO UNCENSORED???? IM ALL FOR IT BUT I LAIGH EVERYTIME I SEE A RED ROCKET LILE?!?! AHAHAH I CANT BREATHE EVERYTIME! AND HIS DICK IS SO STRIAGHT LOOKING??? LIKE- HELP?!?!
A RED ROCKET
Same!! Your comment and pic file made my day!
UGH VERCION GET TF OUT!!! I HATE YOU!!! GHAAAAAAA YOUR MY BIGGEST OPP I SWEAR YOU ARE RUINING EVERYTHINF YOU STUPID CUNT!!!!
UGH VERCION GET TF OUT!!! I HATE YOU!!! GHAAAAAAA YOUR MY BIGGEST OPP I SWEAR YOU ARE RUINING EVERYTHINF YOUS TUPID CUNT!!!!
This story is for the most part okay.
Plot:6/10 (Unclear about what happens to Viktor)
Characters: 8/10 (Decent well written, the devil is how you expect the devil to act)
Smut: 7/10 (Wtf are those dicks, they're a weapon wtf)
Ending:4/10 (Only because we only ever see what Evan goes threw and not Seeing Viktors point of view)
Over all: 7.4/10
I like to imagine the illusion in chap 38(? Iirc) was what happened to viktor
I read this when it was still publishing, But not that I reread it I'm still like "wtf" but At this point I'm more just "How is he not dead" because ik the human a-hole can't stretch like almost 3 times it's size but there's no way he shouldn't be that okay. Also THE INDEGESTION FROM ALL TNAG CUM HELLO??
YESSSSSSS OMGGGG this was what I've been waiting for! I'm all for the angst but when they finally regain EVERYTHING it just makes me so happy
Bro I used to read this when I SHOULDNT HAVE BEEN! and I'm just looking at it now like "Oh my god this is illegal as fuck!" WHAT MADE ME THINK THIS WAS A GOOD STORY??
THIS WAS DROPPED?!?! ARE YOU KIDDING ME!! I HAVENT TOUCHED THIS THING IN OVER 9 MONTHS AND I FIND OUT ITS **CANCLED!!!** THIS WAS THE ONLY BL THAT I FOUND THAT FIT EVERY THING I LOVED AND ITS GONE!!!
Ikr
This should've been longer. The chase should've happened instead of a single "im sorry" It was so pathetic and weak too. Like come on man