
I don't want to insult the work or author and artist but the story and writing is really.... all over the place. I mean one minute she's in a banquet hall where the ml is making his appearance second minute she's shouting at ghosts like is she shouting Infront of everybody..? She's in imperial palace one moment then her home the second. She found her sister saying she's seeing something weird or something weird is happening then she's running away next moment to find her...? Then she meets a ghost who helps her find her sis and take down the evil spirit and now ranon appears the second she calls him, are they allies or some shit didn't they just make a deal? also ranon is obediently listening to her commands. Here I am sitting confused with a ???? Sign on my forehead. The story is weirdly paced with no build up whatsoever..

Okay so chako says reiji's life is his own to live but is she not making decisions and clinging onto him as much as others..? Like ik her family situation isn't great but it's still better than Rei's atleast and she insists on him to take her away from the shitty town. Ik she's just a teen and under immense mental pressure and sees reiji as this supporting pillar but Rei's also a kid with even more fucked up adults around him. Idk if it's harsh or inhuman but I only want him to run away by himself and not be responsible for others (chako). Further cutting ties with everyone related to that town is the only way to wholly leave it behind
FL the brother whole ass decided to kidnap and kill the og FL just because her aura and looks were SIMILAR not even same but similar and you say you didn't know he had a sister complex. Like cmon I knew it from the first chapter before you even pointed it out.