
honestly i loveee this manhwa, but like its getting a bit repetitive with the fights. i think the build up to the fights would be better if it showed more of jiwoo's training and growth. instead of it just being in one chapter of him training. and it honestly wouldnt hurt if he lost to someone, to show how strong hes gotten and what hes lacking.
bec rn the creator is making him too OP... like if he lost and got up from that loss and won, i think that would be more climactic... idk the pacing is kinda weird rn.. i still love it though

Agreed but not completely. No offense btw hehe. For me his growth was actually justified as he was being trained by Kayden which supposed to be really strong. Also, i think the fact that the author still show a bit part of how his training goes is fine since most manhwas now has too much fight scene without training chapters and bond with side characters so it's more messier. It already has 256 chapters so it's fine to focus on fights cause that's what suppose happen. I'm glad that the author did not just let the kids fight on their academy but let them experience the power of the outside too. Nevertheless, I'm pretty much satisfied with how things are going (▰˘◡˘▰)

prediction 1.
i feel like the creator is gonna develop his powers into something that has hidden quirks.. like it would be cool if his bday power developed into something that has to do w foresight. this is an oddly specific ex. but seeing someones bday could also show the past bdays theyve had and who they spent it with, and the mc could use that to their advantage.
prediction 2.
but then again, i think the creator wants to keep his power as simple as possible to show how the mc uses it to his best ability. bec its kinda heading more towards that direction.

i love the tension between the ml and fl... UGH enemies to lovers is just muah! i love how they betray eachother yet somehow need eachother... theyre so toxic it makes sense for them to be together LOL... before chaeah met yoonsoo she didnt have anyone to rely on, vice versa before yoonsoo met chaeah he rlly didnt give a shit abt anyone (except gerum) yes theyre bad for eachother but i think its just bec theyre both extreme tsunderes with alot of trust issues...

everytime i read this manga i always convince myself that theyre not highschool students... cause theres no way T w T... thats honestly the only thing that pisses my off abt the story bec id get it if they were in their early 20s but literally in highschool!?!? youre telling me that a highschooler is a powerful gang member who sleeps around w alot of women probably older than them, and is physically on par w older gang members? i mean ig it makes sense since hes a psychopath.
also i rlly hate all the men in this story... none of them are good. her grandfather gave her away and kirishima is a complete psychopath... ig hes gotten better? but like the bar is in hell rn. shouma i can tolerate but i dont rlly see him as a romantic interest for yoshino more like a big brother. also why is she ALWAYS surrounded by people who would either harm her or lock her up... free my girl.
i think the creator should try to develop yoshino's character, yes shes a strong fl, but in the recent chapters shes been more dependent on kirishima and kinda just accepted her fate as his wife...idk, maybe thats what the creator is trying to do?

the mc kinda dumb to piss him off more... why didnt he just say he works out LOL... its still kind of a logical explanation for why hes strong... like at least try to lie and hide your ability instead of rubbing it in his face... idk the mc kinda a weirdo. the only character i liked was the teleportation dude he minds his business and stuff but the mc was so wrong for exposing both of them directly in front of the antagonist... like at least run somewhere you cant be seen then teleport...
it reminds me alot of god of high school!