
Bruh I really hope the story gets better all these arbitrary obstacles and characters doing everything not to talk.....it's not entertaining its annoying asf. I only read this for the spice because the mc is so annoying.
If the story continues to just be drama induced by lack of simple communication its just not worth reading.
When he was taking the figs to the guy I had zero doubt in my mind that a girl would show up to cast doubt. Like I would have been genuinely surprised if they got to eat the figs together and shared a nice moment
Im just saying this story is extremely predictable. I love the foreplay stuff its so hot genuinely some of my favorite spice scenes in bl ever. Its why im still here but please, if the writer is grasping at straws for a plot just focus on the porn aspect. I wouldn't mind AT ALL. I already skim most of the text because it feels like fodder >_>

Undergrand hotel did this plot better
How are you in prison for a few months and you can't figure out that someone in there for 9 years probably did some fucked up shit. None of the guards appear to be sick individuals who like power plays over inmates. They just want to keep their heads down?
The 1 guy w the best character design is sole gay prison God. K.
It seems like this writer is afraid to show these criminals getting fucked up.
Dude really used a dildo and he avoided getting turned out after some rapist spent 2 weeks in solitary confinement? K.
The jokes suck. The guy is in jail telling them kids they can't have pets.
I agree he should be happy they JUST beat his ass lol and the old man just standing there was funny as hell.
But still the food cum thing seems so out of place. They are straightwhy wouldn't they just piss in it? OK ik a little nitpicky but his reactions are too lax and played as funny hopefully things turn around cus I'm about to drop it lol

I think euntak was annoying. Ik that's supposed to be the point but when he was so obviously displeased after successfully getting the relationship I just rolled my eyes.
The nervousness about being in public is so......extra like the writer hyped it toooooooo much. I was like ......this open ass man is shy now? While he lives with his slut of a bestie

I'm honestly just glad he found out eventually. I read this years ago, and it was at the part where they got together after the door condom moment and I remember being like ew. Unhinged. I am pleased to see the story continued and yes he's still Unhinged but I am happy it didn't work out that way. The torture was a lot I didn't expect but glad it went different than regular Harada. Well off to bible study nowヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

There is a difference however, if someone is unable to distinguish between the two, that’s more on the author than the regular because the author didn’t make it clear when talking about serious situations like this, it has to be pretty clear because real people who blame victims to this day. I’m not saying break this down to a second grader I’m just saying make it clear.

I think the main difference between something like this and killing stalking is killing stalking was just a horror book with homosexuality. And they both met bad ending. Like nothing good ever happened for the two awful main characters especially their relationship. This one is different because the main perpetrator gets a slap on the rest and then it ends like you would see a comedy and in which case he finds him again and they have a will they won’t like he didn’t just almost ruin his life so while I agree, people who can’t distinguish reality from fiction shouldn’t be reading this. I also think writers who can’t properly write a distinction between glorification and depiction shouldn’t be writing it.
Killing stalking was an excellent example because that’s the type of writer who should be writing it.

i see where you’re coming from that’s a good distinction. Harada definitely writes stories for the sake of having messed up stories while KS was more written to write a message. I think it becomes clear after the first few chapters the type of story harada is writing and it falls on the readers to continue or stop. so while Koogi and Harada are writing distinct stories I still think it’s crucial for readers to distinguish the two bc authors like harada won’t simply stop writing nor should they. given all harada’s stories i’m sure we all know their intent; it’s no accident that their stories read as they do i don’t think it’s Harada being unable to distinguish the two in their writing.

I’m not trying to say someone should be kicked out of the writing space I’m just trying to say that a lot of people in situations and fully blame the reader but like most things, It’s a little bit of a a little bit of b like the fault should be on both the reader and the writer. None of them fully takes the blame, and I don’t like seeing when someone fully blames the one and not the other. One of the way someone can educate themselves on whether or not they even like this is by trying, and if they don’t like it, then that person is free to leave a bad comment on it and keep it pushing because it’s not gonna stop the writer. It’s ok for people not to like things
Seme gives off low key unhinged vibes lol
Ikrrrrr? Felt that too but the uke is also like kind a dumb ?! Or am I overthinking it