
The pacing really made me iffy and the dialogue was choppy as some parts but I could work around it, yes it was troublesome to read felt off at times but holy shit I love those fugly ass doodles that would pop up and Seme’s whole obsessive/clingy side and MC’s hot af chill.
The Ex title was really unnecessary since it tried to play it off as if the seme had a full on relationship or even a subtle foundation but now it works more as shock value title
I really don’t hate this cuzs I did find it funny just wished it could’ve been more revised but its good in green flag way but bad in the way it was set up.
My eye legit started twitching…