The kids are such a cute funny part.. I love it. Their so freaking ugly as babies that it’s funny and cute
This shit is so stupid like the art is amazing but it’s wasted on a shitty plot that actually could be good if it was written well. This just seems like some middle schooler dirty Wattpad story (ik cuz it was one)
Actually I agree I saw plot dropping from chapter 10/11 probably
Why?
Plot holes and no logics because somethings don't make sense and storyline could be more detailed and better is what I personally think.
I mean good for him building a relationship but somehow he tracks an organization and kills everyone with this “it’s my first time ever doing this” don’t pmo. Imma still read tho
Well he alredy had problem in the head
Overall I really give this a solid 6, I do wish there was a more in depth chapters of the effects of sa to chiwoo especially with the year off. I feel like that would make me truly feel how disgusted and violent jihyun is, of course I don’t like him but I feel like it could of been something because I mainly associate ( no matter if I do this consciously or not) jihyun with the simple fact he is just a dude with anger issues that needs help not over what he did yk? Also defo really wanted background stories on jihyun dad and his brother when he was little since their half siblings and how chiwoo coped with his dad. I didn’t really feel evoked reading this, maybe it’s bcs I’ve already read it but also maybe since there is no actual connection to these characters, the most thing I appreciate in the story psychological development is the fact chiwoo was reminded that of jihyun in kyujin.
I feel like the author knew from the beginning that they didn’t want to make a really long story so they still included the themes but they didn’t concentrate as deeply on them. I still enjoyed the story, but yeah, it could’ve been way better if these themes were treated more
I love how straightforward it is where a lie or suppressed feelings get resolved in the same chap and isn't dragging out into 5-ect chaps
Oh well , u will not like it on the future arc then ( in novel well, still long way)
I just started reading 2 chapters in and I don’t really like the ml behavior “their both tall how could they be a couple”, “your dick is small”, “I hate that haircut” like no.. if he gets better lmk I don’t like soft characters but I don’t like bitchy ones either. (〜￣△￣)〜 I really like their designs so pls lmk when f there is progress
well he kinda stays that way, by the way he loves big dicks, but in the later chapters he def gets more development in his expectations to love i guess. idk, he gets less bitchy i guess??
Yeah imma just pass on this thanks for explaining I just don’t like his complaining that no one asked for it’s too judgy and picky and I heavily dislike people like that irl