
Well overall it was good but I'm missing some development on the uke's part. His feelings weren't explained properly neither when or how he understood that what he really wanted was a S/m relationship. That's a big step and a big decision and I just didn't see it even though I kept reading.
Enjoyable? Yeah. But it could have been a lot better (no safeword? Really? Even when you're playing with a whip?)
I'm disappointed :(
There you go. A hunk for you to train from scratch. It's not that bad...