Seme's switch up from finding him uncomfortable to suddenly wanting his attention and being jealous feels a little rushed. Would have been nice to see it develop a little more organically.
I never took this seriously because its slapstick comedy and mid art. I read it because its absurdity was kinda funny. But now that its turning serious, its just cringey lol.
I thought they were a green flag couple, but after reading everything, they seem more like a yellow. Uke's the problematic one tho, way too controlling. And why do authors always write it in such a way that after someone gets sexually assaulted by someone else, their partner's instinct is to aggressively have sex with the victim instead of consoling them? Its so annoying.
I don't mind an older looking guy, but those cheekbones make him look so gaunt-- its kinda creepy. He looked so much better in the first chapter.
I think it looks just fine. I love the alpha either way. They both grown men.
Really hated this after the rape scene. I was willing to pretend it never happened, but how can I when he literally has trauma because of it and it still affects him til now :(
But I'm a little disappointed that the drunk jerking-off incident happened. It was their first intimate experience, but it felt off. Maybe cause I was expecting it to be more.. romantic? This is a slow burn, so usually when a big step is made, its super exciting-- but that felt so anti-climactic and such a typical yaoi scene. So blah.
Anyway, gonna pretend that didn't happen, and they're both still cutely tiptoeing around their crush on each other. This chapter had me more excited than than the jerk-off.
Wait on which ch did that happen?? I don't remember such a thing happening(⊙…⊙ )
Bye, I dont remember them jorking it
Ch 20-21
thats the spirit
I feel like he killed his own father-- that's why his memories are messed up, cause of trauma and shit.
WTH they are so cute. The cutest. I can't.