this is a great story. i would do no changes.
10/10 ofc
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1. wtf was that
2. i read this so fast and in my mind everyone was screaming every line so that was hilarious and a experience i never want to have again
3. WTF WAS THIS SHT HE WAS FIVE thats at least weird
no wayy i read like 3 panels before coming back to read the comments and i yelled each line i read out lmfaoo it just seemed so dramatic
cant people get arrested for writting this type of shit
this is where millions of years of evolution created and i am happy with it #weloveass
should have suffered more ngl he took the life of an child, thats no excuse but theres an explanation he was a victim i feel sorry truly, but you can be a victim and an piece of shit
ummm okey? this was the most anticlimactic and no flavor ending i've ever read.
i adored the realism of them two, and thats what kept me going and i can say it was not a waste of time but WHY WOULD YOU NOT EXPLAIN THE MOST IMPORTANT THING OF THE PLOT: HIS JOB gjrl bffr im so mad