
the love story evolution here was heart melting they took everything one step by step until the Seme had that dry reaction 'well he was a straight' 'so it's understandable' but still in front of him he should have behaved better. The Uke definitely is a precious character I got some of my doubts about him just because of his look 'because most of slutt' s dress up that way' but lucky that I didn't judged his character. I wish there were some more scene of them in lovey dovey way, more yaoi, more uncensored scene 5 chapters were short to enjoy them fully

there is a certain level of Fetish. Well suppose if someone you know he/she acts nicely to you but he stole's your spoon, underwear, what you used that will be really creepy to the point of making things scary. But it's a fictional art so I think it's alright well Uke has a Fetish of his body smell and Seme is a high level stalker so it's ok both of them are similar to each other

It feels like the entire story was made to statify sex hunger, I couldn't saw any story or characters development yeah it was sexy as f*ck but when I read a Yaoi I expect also a side story otherwise I can just sit and watch something on pornh*b. I also get why may be it got dropped by the translation group because after the 2nd chapter as always 'if the story is in Yakuza background most of time' Uke gets raped because the rival group wants to ruin his status also here happened the same thing. I Just wonder why they still didn't added the Threesome, Orgy or Rape TAG in that way I wouldn't waste my time to read it

the shaved head couple made me have that doki doki feeling, I just couldn't stop laughing when I saw Uke getting hard just by touching his head the second couple looked like the Uke was a bit unsecured but in the end I had a little hard time to understand how they make up. The first couple felt a lot like a Shounen-Ai couple yeah thanks to that last part we got some great hard yaoi scene otherwise the story itself was very simple without any unwanted twist well I would have liked to see if there where some scenes where they concentrates more on the Uke's feelings because in this version there were only all feelings of Seme

after the first chapter I started to just slide pages because the story didn't had that something that can catch my attention, the context wasn't great like how the Uke didn't wanted a fixed partner or how in the end he wanted Seme to look 'no good' just because he wants to keep him for himself well the second story I didn't even read it carefully because after few pages I already got what was going to happen

the parrot was the cupid of this couple... I would like to see a chapter of Uke being drunk and all honest because like this it feels like only Seme kun loves yeah he said it's all written in his book but I still want him to say it
If I have to choose between like or hate I would rather say I hate you more.... TSUNDERE

I'm happy for them to end up together after so many years of expectancy
For real if it were me I wouldn't be able to live with the person I have a crush without doing anything, it's not like being a pervert but it's more like a body reaction and at some point my heart would explode if I didn't told my feelings
Respect them for so much patience
My favorite line was when Uke said "if it's not you, all are the same" kyaaaaaa

that sudden kiss was unexpected but it was sweet. The background itself is interesting just hope he can pay back the debt his dad left as heredity for him as soon as possible, it hurts to see him in that life style Condition. In 5 chapters we got 1 kiss so I think may be they are directing the story in a Shounen-Ai genre side and it's good but it would make me more happy if it turns out to be even a soft Yaoi will do
they are attracted to each other but for the young age black haired guy made a mistake of not admitting that he is gay but after loosing his loved partner he realized he loves him and then thei're long journey starts. The story was good but looked a bit stupid like how the both of them didn't took the right decision at the right time well important is that even if they are in their 40's they are happy and together