I... What the hell. Bro got casually assaulted, forced into marriage and bit all in one chapter wtf lmao???
He also managed to slip and fall onto the ml's d!ck im crying what is this story
I didnt expect the quick exchange of i love yous LOL
Reading through the comments has me cackling cause I also hateeeee how dumb they made the uke like. But I want to see the baby so imma power through.
This is giving 90s shoujo core but instead of a petite bug eyed girl, its a buff bearded omega bottom HAHAHA
It was alright for what its worth, I hope they patch up a lot of the loopholes in the aude stories at least. Super rushed ending :'l
And low-key, im more proud of the development from gargoyle claws to normal looking nails LOLLLLL pls I couldn't even take it seriously ahahaha
Had better potential frfr
Bruh we kinda lost the strength of the plot in the middle. The ml isn't even a problem tbh it was the mc becoming op all of a sudden LOLLL. Fym you became powerful af after the ogfl gave you some heirloom when she doesnt even know tf is actually happening. How convenient lolol. The conclusion of the plot was weak
Its good for a one time read. The mls were hot. I like Dan but Eugene was a better ml tbh. Or even Kain. Augh.
I feel like it woupdv3 been an actual masterpiece if it had more chapters and had fleshed out the backstories and even the general events better than just brushing over it within 4-5 panels. Like I want my heart to clench and hurt more you feel me? I wanna SOB. This had the potential frfr. But the read was good. Matsumoto the mvp lol
I keep stumbling upon total red flag stories and im so done w how abundant ts is GIMME ME MORE GREEN FLAG W A GRIPPING PLOT DAMMIT. IT CANT BE THAT HARD TO NOT WRITE RAPE AND STILL MAKE THE ML SEXY???????
AUGH SO HELP ME LAWD I HATE LIFE
At first I was just confused, now im disgusted and confused.
I dont think I'm boutta continue ts, I thought id come here for a baby but no thanks
HELLO???? I SAW A POST ONLINE ABT A BABY IN THIS STORY NOW IM LEAVING W A TRUCKLOAD OF TRAUMA HELP
The characters and the artsyle and low-key the fantasy horror part of the story was so interesting but
WHY DOES ZIGRIL EXISTTTTT the story would prolly be perfect w/o his bichass fr AUGH
This could've been SO much better bc the characters are actually cute and I love the artist's style. But then they had to add SA and then it exponentially got rushed to the ending without a lot of depth aughhhh
I started this cause I was outta omegaverse stories and this had a good rating and tbh was traumatised at first. Couldn't even take them seriously (lowkwy still cant HAHA)
BUT NOW THAT IM USED TO IT, WHYS THIS ACTUALLY A BETTER GREENFLAG STORY THAN MOST BYE
Im actually rooting for these two now haha











