This authors propably the best yaoi dick drawer there is, good shit also DAMNNNNN
This manwha is SHIT
I can say that confidently even ignoring the propblamtic shit
This manwha is shit becuase of the story and writting, the characters are as deep as a paper plate and as likeable as the shit smear on a toilet stall door.
Dan has no fucking back bone which makes him unlikable, the top, forget his name even, is literally an asshole with no reademing qualities (his dicks too big even)
And I am going to laugh my ass off if the author makes it so the top has "sad past.,.,." which has made him this way. Because the top has showed no signs of that at all. Here's a comparison: In BJ Alex the top did show some signs as to why he was an ass, though still not really fitting excuses, it added depth and a layer of realism.
Yeah the top here is like a fucking wood plank that just hammers poor Dan here.
but I am honestly curious how the author will continue this story, cus I legit cannot think of anything that can save it, besides Dan learning to stand up for himself and find happiness, while the top fucking idk gets pummeled and retires from boxing and learns through loss how much of a shit person he is.
Will say, the art is fantastic, perhaps the author should just focus on their art instead of writing.
I write this comment in frustration, becuase I feel this could have been good, by the initial premise and art.
Tdlr: the arts good, the writing is shit, the characters are like two slices of plain ass white bread that make a shit sandwich. I fear it will always be shit, but it could've been good.
Also for the people who like jinx, you do you babe, but I recommend finding better written bl.
And to very toxic haters, babe it's two fucking 2d plain bread ass men fucking eachother, stop caring this much
yeah this is the compressed version of all my thoughts about this webtoon
Also actaully lemme touch on the problematic shit becuase I didn't say anything about but I have thoughts.
And my only real thoughts about it is
1. Fucking hate when authors just shovel in SA like seriously, in this way specifically becuase they treat it so lightly or brush it off when it is a very serious thing.
2. STOP FUCKING NORMALIZING SA IN BL AND BRUSHING IT OFF
FUCJK
FOR REAL! If they didn't have that much sexual assault and an actual storyline (probably comes in season 2) this could have been somewhat like Codename Anastasia.
I referenced Codename Anastasia because of how much people hate jinx over codename
The art amazing, the characters are cute, though the writing is hmmm could be better..
It's feels rushed and the relationship between feels a bit.. idk how to describe but takaras feeling switch was a bit sudden idk
If this longer I think it would be better
Still a cute read
On chapter 3 but had to make a comment cus what?? What is this start???
Like it's terrible but I'm laughing lmao
Love the jinx comment section, mix of people shitting on the manwha, people defending it, people making posts to be aware of an identity stealer or some shit, and that one girl that's batshit insane stalking people for hating on this manwha cus she's got no life
Anyway, this manwha mid, art style is good, but stories bland, top written as a prick with no redeeming qualities, and bottoms plain as bread with no back bone.
Bad writing, good art, batshit fanbase
you laid my thoughts in this manhwa so well (●'◡'●)ﾉ
Dude what is this shit, I saw some posts about snippets so thought it be a fine
This is just kidnap + rape shit?? With an art style that makes the top/rapist look like a fucking Baki character
Anyway haven't felt this uncomfortable and upset at a manwha in a while, if I could give a negative rating I would.
The bottom (really more like victim) never shows that he likes the top at all and does not like or consent to the sex at all, that much is very clear. And no him getting hard, which the top likes to point out, does not mean he's enjoying it or consenting.
Also him saying they've been going at it for a month straight??? The amount of marks on him???
When he ran away he felt nothing towards the top and cared for his safety, and top straight up knocked him out and brought him back.
Very disturbing and disgusting stuff.
This is essentially, a homeless abused young guy, (which btw his age isn't shared in the manwha but him running in 10th grade being mentioned, he very well could be a minor which is even more fucked) getting kidnapped while he's looking for food and somewhere to stay out of the cold. He is held hostage and raped every single day. Then the rapist murders someone and scares him shitless so he runs away, causing the other guy to knock him out, being him back, and rape him while he's knocked out until he wakes up. And then his rapist has him promise to always stay with him???
Also the top is UGLY AS FUCKKK, like I know you horny fujoshis will look the other no matter how disgusting shit is but really???
Bro this is by far more tame than the worst thing I've read, this definitely isn't that bad also sure the bottom doesn't really like him but also he's not making it so much of a point that he hates it even thinking it's not that bad at times so I don't really see the problem (especially when I compare it to more disgusting works I've read and been disturbed by)
The thing about the more distrubing stuff is that it's SUPPOSED to be disturbing, I fucking hate these manwha that try to paint these happy relationships when it's just rape
The only interest the bottom showed is that he in like one panel thought the guy was hot, and other hints of him thinking, like the whole jacking off thing
Still doesn't make up for the fact he's being held captive and raped.
No hate to you, just saying
Ofc ofc I don't mind, but in particular the Manhwa I was thinking of was just that, depicting the terrible things happening to the Mc as fine even though the ml betrayed him so terribly (idk if I should go into detail but let's just say,, he killed all his friends and then basically turned him into a sex slave,, it was absolutely terrible) they acted like it was completely fine, not even depicting the love as twisted but as normal like they should be together after all that,, aaaa sorry sorry that's a completely different topic
I don't think the bottom ever really truly hates it, which is why to be completely honest I think if this story was given a little more time to develop (it was all rushed so the end leaves a bit of a bad taste) it would be nice, tho Ig the author just wanted smut( ￣_￣|||)
Had to skip past these latest chapters cus it just me cringe
1. So much sticky surgery stuff
2. Bro you roll bake shit there that is a health code violation I swear
3. It just kinda looks gross with everything on them
Same here
Yeah idk this BL's kinda doodoo
The main couple didn't have like any chemistry before and it felt kinda forced, still does
I sticker around because the luck thing was a cool concept, how they can like balance eachother out
But it seems the author has completely forgotten about and the manwha is just porn with terrible plot now
Bummer
i think it's gonna come back a bit later to bite them in the ass and give more drama. like we still haven't learned properly about the death of ml's parents and all. and maybe his powers will put that third wheel in danger somehow after he pisses him off idk we'll see
if you're curious enough, you can just check it out after at least several months lol
Feel author has a little bit of same face syndrome going on here, when I saw uriels friend I was like "huh??? Uriel but with melanin???" Lol
Story seems nice so far, but I kind agent a eerie feeling from it. Like whats with the nightmares?