damn... haha... he was so happy, they were so happy.. my stomach can't handle this
the world building & the story was interesting, the only problem I have was Luso. its clear he has a crush but the way he treated the uke as if an object is just.. disturbing to me, but oh well~
Like other comments pointed out, this is the weakest author's work. Its sweet & have potential. I've re read it & still can't feel how Hiro become "the one" or find difference between him & the other costumers. Sure, it probably bc it was written from Hiro perspective, at first, but the Seme, should at least, make it clear in the story how he fell for Hiro.
It just, kinda sad that the side story have more chemistry despite the shallow plot. & it also sad we can understand how Hiro fell for Seme yet it felt "vague" (at least for me) for Seme's turn.
Idk. Sorry for my yapping, I like the concept, tbh, it has genuine potential, to be peak, especially for the seme's character, how he become such kind & soft to all his costumers (yes he felt guilty, but I mean like the inner battle uk? it can be deeper) yet fell for One, only. Its interesting, lol.