Geez, what a mess of a story. Btw, am I the only one that don't like the speech bubbles? My brain reads it as if they are whispering because it usually looks like that when they whisper.
I do not get the appeal of childlike adults, disturbing how much the author forces every character to like him. Everyone likes his childlike looks and behaviour...
I just don't like stories where women are seen lika prey and unable to do anything. She dances after his tune anyway and he gets what he want all of the time. Well, a woman worshipping a man is always cringey to me.
It's really getting on my nerves that it doesn't follow the original storyline. The way she behaves HARDLY expresses hate, that's not how Eros arrows work. She should have been completely disgusted by him, her skin should crawl with his touch.
Also i really detested the "I'll never hurt you" as he was literally giving her no choice while raping her.
No, this is not what I want at all in the story. Naos is like a 100 times hotter so don't waste time on this
I could careless i want a harem now (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
YES
Dude THIS IS THE PROCESSS!! The more he get jealous the better heheheh
REAAAL I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE ITლ(´ڡ`ლ)
A really frustrating sorry excuse of a story. Why do trashy semes get to be here!? And why make the uke into a sobbing, cofused mess? And if a grapist start to stalk you, call the police. Gross!
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Am i the only one that wants the succubus bword to piss off? Go away, you are annoying. You are forcing them to do this, don't pretend otherwise.
I really prefer not to have any grape scenes, at least don't draw it and show us, nobody wants to see that.