This story had potential but it's so hard to understand whats going on most of the time. I made it a point to atleast read half of the story before doing anything rash, but god, it felt like a chore to read through the chapters. the author frequiantly adds scenes and storylines that get abruptly cut short for no reason and then "continues" those storylines with some half-assed "flashbacks" which feels unnecessary. Although I haven't read through the whole thing yet, it just feels like poor pacing and the author places too much trust in the reader to understand what the hell's going on.
This story had potential but it's so hard to understand whats going on most of the time. I made it a point to atleast read half of the story before doing anything rash, but god, it felt like a chore to read through the chapters. the author frequiantly adds scenes and storylines that get abruptly cut short for no reason and then "continues" those storylines with some half-assed "flashbacks" which feels unnecessary.
Although I haven't read through the whole thing yet, it just feels like poor pacing and the author places too much trust in the reader to understand what the hell's going on.