I literally have so much to say but I can't find words.
I'm speechless with the fact that unofficial translation are better than official translation
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Unofficial was easier to understand and made more sense
This official translation literally leave me speechless...
I agree. I feel like I’m being trolled atp. It feels like they grabbed someone off the Korean version of fiverr and tossed them 50 bucks to translate the whole thing.
Like, why is Keith saying it’s dangerous near the ground. He’s a kid. Thats where they typically are.
The unofficial translations make more sense. “The concrete is dangerous.” Given the situation that caused Yeonwoos amnesia, that’s an expected response.
Can I really say something?
Not trying to offend anyone here
But it honestly seems so fast paced
And there's many plot holes
Even the start is little confusing
But honestly it's such a different type of story that makes it so unique and fun
And that art style
But in my personal opinion
If the story slowed down a little
It would make it more fun
Anyway the main idea of this story is just like so good
Honestly I'm just happy there isn't any rape and toxicity in it
I hope Both live happily and enjoy without any toxic drama
Imma talk a little about the novel here so those who don't want spoiler please don't read below this
Tho it's just a little spoiler but still I'm warning
I've read the extras of this novel
Where they both have the children
From that alone I know this novel is good
Doesn't really have the toxic drama
Tho seme probably have separation anxiety and is really cautious about puppy
But both are such a good couple
Yep I get it many people love the pace it currently has
And their chemistry is good too
The best part is seme isn't forcing puppy over anything
That's why said personally I would have like if the pace was slowed a little bit because I like soft slow burn not toxic
If I must say say something then I'm just satisfied that this story isn't toxic
I don't care if it seems fast to me
I'm satisfied enough with understanding and loving seme lol
i know where ur coming from, tbh manhwas tend to be much more fast paced than the novels some even leave out some details.
it actually depends on the storyboard of the artists and what they can fit in a limited panels, some artist don't even get paid enough to add more chapters (of course not all)
plus, it's how the author and artist agreed upon their storyboard/chapters/contract and so on..
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Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end! Please don't end!
Dojin WAS and he still IS the PROBLEM!!!
She literally abandoned hyesung
Then suddenly appeared and again blamed hyesung for it
And now dojin is supporting that women??
Without hyesung knowing?
Even byul is meeting her???
This is literal such an piece of shit
Like
I'm so pissed off please
If I were at that place and I knew my partner was supporting the women who literally was reason behind all my childhood trauma
I'm gonna sue him
Istg
Hyesung should literally not forgive dojin and byul for this
Byul is still understandable that he wants to keep contact with other grandparents and he doesn't know the backstory
But Dojin literally know how bad hyesung got hurt because of her
And still???
FUCK YOU DOJIN!!!
SOMEONE IN THE COMMENT SAID HE SHOULD DIVORCE
HE HYESUNG SERIOUSLY SHOULD!!!!!
WHO THE FUCK WANTS A PARTNER WHO DOESN'T EVEN UNDERSTAND BOUNDARIES!!!!!
LIKE WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU EVEN SUPPORT A WOMEN WHO HURT HIM SO BADLY??????????????
IM SO FUCKING PISSED OF PLEASE
DOJIN NEEDS CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT
BEING GOOD FATHER ISN'T EVERYTHING!!!
Understanding your partner is also important what they like and what they don't like is also important
FUCK THIS SHIT IF AUTHOR TRIES TO GIVE THAT WOMEN ANY REDEMPTION ARC!!!!
Damn im rereading it after so long
And fuck
I'm so glad I never blamed hyesung
Like for the starting of 20-25 chapters it's the alpha who's at fault
Like how he never let's hyesung leave his house, the forcing him and knotting him then pregnancy where he made hyesung carry the child
Hyesung literally had all the right to leave him
And people literally blamed hyesung for leaving byul!!!!











I don't really hate the step sibling story. It might be because the step sibling stories are in trend right now that's why the author decided to add that trope in the story. In my opinion nothing wrong they're just following the trend.
But the actual problem is I don't see the chemistry between the step sibling
Author is just trying to force that trope between them.
Even if it's step sibling story chemistry between them matters more which matter of facts there's none between this two.
A and yi has grew up together as sibling. A always emphasized with Yi more as a sibling. Even when he got to know they aren't biological sibling. He didn't wanted to lose yi as his brother and tried to make it believe everyone that they're actual sibling.
Yi story doesn't make sense to me. He hated A when he was born coz he was afraid that their parents won't love him anymore thus he pretended to be a good brother just to fit in the family and then he fell in love with A? Doesn't make sense to me
His desire to protect A is more like brother complex rather than lover.
And his parents agreeing to this is weirdest of all.
Rather than yi forcing his feeling on A if the story went something like...
A parents tell yi to date as he's at the age of marriage. At first A feels weird then he see you agreeing to it. Then he watch Yi go on date with a women. He ignores this feeling as brother complex. Then when see yi seeing a women he feels jealously. Later consulting with his friend he realises his feelings aren't just brotherly love it's more than just that. Later he starts distancing himself from yi after realising his feelings for him.
After yi realise A is avoiding him he went to ask A about it.
After some drama Yi realises about A feeling for him.
Then slowly yi also fell in love with him.
But he's reluctant about it because of his parents.
The A talks to his parents. Make them agree about their relationship.
But parents don't totally agree about that.
And Yi is scared of disappointing them
If the story went like this it could have been more interesting and made sense in my opinion
Same, I didn't have a problem w the step siblings but everyone overlooking and blaming the author themselves is putting me off since a author will try their best to join the latest trends and make their story popular. What I do is just skip the step siblings if I get annoyed because they lowkey seem forced to me.
Thats the issue. It's a spinoff idea. Don't follow a trend if you don't know how to write it.
Then we don't really have a say in it in the end. It's the author's need to write something that they didn't fully think of the consequences, other than needing their story to gain more popularity over something trending. (⊙…⊙ )