
To be honest, I'm pretty disappointed that the entire sex scene wasn't just censored, but completely cut out by manta. This story is not porn, but a beautifully poetic and visually stunningly told tender love story and the sex scene was written in the same way. For me, there is no reason to simply cut something like that when it carries and conveys so much of the feeling that exists between the two protagonists. It's like tearing the story apart.
Luke looking for Andrew under the bed is just so cute - I mean, come on Luke, the guy is probably well over six feet tall, you're not going to find him there.
I was thinking about the same thing, too.
Luke was so adorable.