Abel✯lied's Topics (614)

The story is kind of basic so far, but the artist is doing so much work. Oh my god. Construction crew's worth of work on this art.

There's my princess, it's been too long

Sorry, was I wrong to expect a bit of a psychological mystery? Was I wrong to expect the mc to keep his unique personality???

Complex emotions of guilt, not over his friends death, but over his apathy turn into "Geez, were you saying this stuff, when you were flirting with my dead friend?"

Struggling to adjust to being financially independent and working for the first time as a privileged, but exploited person turns into "Erm... I'm in my pajamas at this fancy restaurant you're taking me to?"

Tense atmosphere over the mysterious death and the suspicion of the male lead turns into "Uuugh, you're so mean. Let's sleep together."

Character that was cold and expressionless, only looking out for his own gain turn into the most typical uke

I'm still wishing upon a star that the Ml is treating the main character exactly how he treated his best friend. I hope the interrogation scene wasn't just "oooh, that'd be pretty cool", but had meaning. I do hope that the "Ugh, this dead friend of mine was such an annoying loser" is an interesting character thought process and not just "the author also thinks this guy is an annoying loser". I hope that thec is just falling for a really well crafted lie.

There is the distinct possibility, that this story wasn't that much better at the start, but the art style had so much more character, that it imprinted in mind as something greater.

Imagine me standing next to you with a metal bat, as you type your comment about a sweet, kind, but uninformed female character, that has done nothing wrong yet, except shown sudden affection to her fiance, that she hasn't seen in months.

When a misunderstanding already happened, it's like a pile of tangled cables on the ground, but even you see it happening, see the origin point, it's like a rope closing in around your neck. No!! Don't practice dominant sex with the man that the man you like is jealous of.. Gwaaaaajhhhhh.
Anyway, I thought that the first misunderstanding would be solved during their first time ("Eh? But I've never done this before..."), but they're both too proud for that. This is going to be a ride.

I need his head on a plate~

But seriously though, what a ridiculously good story! I love that you can see and feel in every chapter how loved the main character is by those in his past. How he is still himself, even if he forgets. How they're there for him and how they still love him even though he can't remember. Waaaaaahhhhhh

I want to trust Lisbeth, but she's the owner of the place. She could've left someone there to check on him and report to her. I smell schemes in the air.

Since we're all throwing out theories and they all turn out wrong, this actually happened to them irl, but they're stuck in a limbo or something. I have faith in horror tropes

"Stop pretending you're a good person" Alright, she will lol

Hhhhgggghhh,I know we can't be picky with gl, but I do think some things could've been done better.

I wish it wasn't so rapey?? Like I get this is a common way to got from point A to point B in smut, but a lady who gets off on luxurious high heels should be a bit more dignified with hoe she expresses her taste.

If you're gonna give a character a fetish, why isn't it the focus of the smut?? This isn't being stepped on in high heels, this is a shoe being gently pressed against a face?

The intro was a bit redundant and the past where they meet on the train could've been better spent on pacing out the smut, so it's a bit more sensual.

If the character has to make a creepy pervert face, I respect it, but at least add some blush lines! It's like I'm reading smut of the Joker.

I think the mc is perhaps a bit too masculine and I'm saying this as a butch number one fan. I think if it was just the muscles, I wouldn't mind it, but it's the fact that we can't see her chest at all, until like two sudden panels of boobs. Those are not small enough to hide completely, even under oversized clothes lol.
It kind of feels like someone drew straight smut and added boobs last minute, the way that mc isn't really touched at all until they start scissoring.

Nah bro, teasing a friend for their accent/dialect is rude, but infinitely less weird than butting into a stranger's conversation to lecture them about how they should treat their friend, especially if the other person laughs it off.