By no means am i part of a scanlation team, im just privately into it. ive done very little typesetting and ceaning before. I recommend you try centering the text boxes, might make it easier to fit the words into those tight boxes. maybe a smaller general font (as these text boxes seem to be tiny). and when you have dark text with a dark background, try using a white letter glow around the text to make them a bit more elligible. I think you're cleaning on pg.4 was pretty well done for the first half. though of course, i feel like cleaning is a lugxury when you're working on a project on your own. it's quite time consuming if you dont know what youre doing. plus with all the textures in the series, super hard to clean. And maybe proofreading?? there was a translation on pg.4 that didnt make sense to me at all.
BUTT other those tips, i think you did a good job. the general ghist of the chapter came accross. some details were lost in translation though. Thank you for the update!! im not sure what system you use, but i used photoshop prior. so these are recommendations based off of that system i dabbled with.
hello! just wanna inform you i accidentally downvoted, sorry
ah! no worries!! i'd take any downvote from hisoka ;) anyday, sheessshhhh
Why them twin grow up like that???!?!?!?!?!? LIKEEE EXCUSE ME???!?!?! WHAT HAPPENED TO ALL THE FLUFF AND CHILDLIKE CURVES????? why are thye so chiseled??? feels illegal man...
Development in the midst of sex???!?! WOOOWW, sandards just wayyy too high with this series. sheesshhh, how am i gonna feel satisfied with anything else at this point. lol
At this point i dont understand the plot of the story and the point of a lot of their fights. I mean, i get it, people have inner monologues that they cant say out loud and in turn leads to a miscommunication..... but with these two specifically.... at what point is there a curve for learning that doesnt just cycle back???
feels more like the author is just planning on making them go though all the typical hoops and hurdles for the sake of it?? I guess i just cant see the value in this circular cycle method?? [what i mean is: its not like they're learning and then building on top of that. it feels more like they start at ground zero at every hoop and hurdle... make it over... then back to ground zero for another one. For stories, i usually imagine a stair method where they'd get over one hurdle, grow as people, come to another hurdle to grow more as people???]
I mean, i may just not be seeing the character development??? idk...
anyway, if you read this far. lmk what you think. even if you dont agree with me. would love to hear other's pov of it. <3 happy reading!
my heart!!!! we're here againnnnn askldjglsadjflkjdsflakjsdf. lord plzzzzzz, make the angst hort. i cant handle when those two arent happy and smiling. askjfalsdjklajsd
I know this is a mess right now. BUUTTTTT!!!! kyaaaa. THAT MEANS THAT THERES A POSSIBILITY THAT ROUROU WILL HAVE A BABY SIBLING??????!?!?!??!?! RIGHT?????? AKSJLJKFLAKJFLASDHLAKJSLAJKHFABJF
No wonder he's into such a strong omega. Looks just like his capable omega papa. How cute TToTT His little soft side is just like his alpha papa. Such good parents.