The plot has good idea but I don't like the Alfa. I like the idea were after death the omega feels pain through the mark but is free to love again. I think it would be interesting to write more on this.
I just hope this story will have an end this time. I'm waiting for gloomy night for age... The Alfa is well designed but not the Omega. He seems stupid. I need to be more patient with that because this author has very good and one of kind stories.
It is not an insult per say, but it is a proof of the author's ignorance I guess. It is just a reference to the country ruled by Black Panther in the Marvel Comics (and Avengers movies). The word in itself has no pejorative meaning.
It is not an insult per say, but it is a proof of the author's ignorance I guess. It is just a reference to the country ruled by Black Panther in the Marvel Comics (and Avengers movies). The word in itself has ... Laeticool
The plot has good idea but I don't like the Alfa. I like the idea were after death the omega feels pain through the mark but is free to love again. I think it would be interesting to write more on this.