okay so i just read this story completely. it’s pretty good. i LOVE the MC. i’m mostly put off by the weird child-like characteristics of the ml. while i don’t find MC a creep for getting together with ml at all, because he probably just finds him immature. it’s just as a reader knowing that ml didn’t age past like 9 kinda makes the whole thing uncomfortable? it would’ve been a more interesting story if they were more like best friends or smth like that. i still think the story is well-written given the constraints of being a short story, but the sexual aspects of it does diminish the reading experience
I wouldn’t say he didn’t age past nine. In I sense I get what you mean. He’s not mentally stuck at 9. In one of the panels it mentions him being smart but uneducated, I think that sorta explains his restraints. He’s able to learn past 9 and think like an adult with the right education. IDK SORRY I can’t really explain it
nooo i completely get u! i think that makes more sense, and makes me honestly way more comfortable with the dynamic of i thought about it that way.
happy reading!
yeahhh i might drop the story. idk its just not like… hooking me anymore. idk how to describe how im feeling, but i feel as if the author is trying to deliver a really deep story, but it doesn’t work out the way it was intended because of the amt of smut there is. you can have smut in your story and still make it well written ofc, case in point Payback, but i think the author just isn’t balancing what she wants the story to have. ofc im seeing people really like this story so obv its subjective. i also just dont really like MC so there’s that too
i don’t even like the characters i’m just living for the drama tbh
is it just me or does the official translation read weird?
I swear it was ok before the side stories started coming out now it reads like someone who doesn't know English very well is translating it
idk, i really like this story but it bothers me how weird the seme is about omegas. like “oh all omegas are the same” or “stay with me an omega can pop out at any moment” says shit like this every damn chapter. it feels weirdly objectifying and just generalizing all omegas. feels like underlying sexism. it’s just a nitpick bc i do like the story and characters but yeah
Did you just skim over the backstory?
fr like a big chunk of the plot is how his bad experiences led him to be like that
The way you skipped a huge part of the main plot
yall ik the backstory but i still think the way he treats the mc could be better. just bc u were traumatized doesn’t mean u get to take it out on others. just my two cents
to add on ik it’ll be better over time but im just saying like rn where the story is at
Was there a scene where he verbally or physically abused an omega though? It’s a surprise that he still allows omegas on teams underneath him, he just doesn’t want them clinging on him or were you just hyperfocused on the ML and MC’s relationship and assumed that was the ML’s treatment to all omega
i loveee mc in this story. he’s the best mc i’ve read in a while. it’s really depressing seeing what he worked so hard for get ruined because of his traumatic experiences and lack of money. too real tbh