
*want to point out first that I actually really loved this story and the characters, the plot is interesting and fun BUT I’d say it could have been so much better. IMO it’s still worth the read, it’s still really really funny and to me, it makes me like the story more. Two things tho,
1) pacing should have been slower, felt rushed as soon as the mc was introduced to the story. Easily could have been a 60-90 chapter story and honestly would have been a lot better if the story was longer or if the author paced the plot differently.
2) pointless rape at the end that the mc didn’t even seem to care? O.o if the author wanted to put that evil spirit in as a conflict it should have been handled differently. And I’m glad the character was brought back but I was hoping for more story other than him just raping and poofing as if nothing happened.

As people said the characters are so unlikable and the plot was a hot mess but I can’t shake this feeling the execution of the story itself.
The pacing, the dialogue, the art… all actually amazing. Incredible really. If the plot was tweaked in a few places then this story would be so good.
Remove the cousin aspect and make Jimin older, make Kyujin less selfish and impulsive. Even in his inner dialogue he had no reasoning on why he went back and forth until much later and even that didn’t make sense. Id go as far to say that he needed to grow a fucking back bone.
The timeskip is when he should have been living by himself and learn how to live his life not revolving around his cousin. Kyujin had no development and no sign of it.
Doyeol and Jimin almost had development and then it got twisted at the end >.>

I usually don’t post stuff like this but I’m feeling confident about this view.
There’s a game I play while reading any BL and it’s “Can you spot the demisexual?”
And goddamn, the professor really is demisexual. I don’t usually post this stuff cause I worry people will come after me in the comments but I really feel those demisexual vibes from him.
The high functioning sociopath trope (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
Love and hate these, their partners are always very expressive