Something tells me the Author be having fun writing these scenes. The dialogue is all kinds of hot and perverted and I'm not complaining, nor am I embarrassed to say I love every bit of it.
Chapter 4 - "You've got a nice dick. Is it bc you work out?" What in the actual fuck is that question?? Lmao.
After that line, I paused my reading. That was just so cringe. And by the looks of you guys' comments, I probably should delete it from my bookmarks and not continue reading it.
I will never not get enough of Kenta and the other guys constantly taking photos of Toma's cuteness. And now Dong is in the picture so it's double cuteness and double pictures.
Hmmm.....sometimes, my mind tends to change about a character for the better when I see their background. I know people hate it when MLs especially use their shitty life as an excuse to be a shit human being. It's funny that Robina has taken over that part from the Duke so he doesn't have to be a dick. Lol
But even after seeing her BG, I still don't feel sorry for her. Your family is strict and your father is shit. That has fuck all to do with Viola (and her loving family) and you basically stepped on her to elevate yourself and make yourself feel, look, and be better than her. Your shitty family and lack of talent doesn't compute. And when "Viola" changed and decided not to let you walk all over her, you had the audacity to get mad.
It's a nope for me. A big ass nope. Don't feel sorry for her. Don't think.she should be forgiven. Don't think she should get any type of leniency. Let Robina rot in that cell where she should have BEEN before it got to this point.
I cannot stress enough how much I love and enjoy this story. Hold on for a sec....THATS KEI'S MAMA??? I thought she was a student!....Anyway, back to what I was saying. I think I've said it before but the touching in this reminds me if The Nerd Project. The touching and kissing is so unbelievably hot in that and personally, I haven't found a story who comes close to how sensual their love language is...until I read this story.
Even when Kei takes MCs face in his hands so that he can see MCs mouth, it's so innocent, yet sensual and beautiful to me. I feel like touching might be their love language too. At least it might be Kei's. And he doesn't even know it yet. Lol
This will probably be like a 15 chapter long story or something like that. :-( I truly wish it was a full length story with 50 or so chapters and some side stories. It doesnt even have to be colored. I just want it longer bc when it ends soon, I know I'm gonna be incredibly sad. Sorry if I'm dramatic. LOL:-))
So....how many times is Lina gonna cause a spectacle and or fuck up for someone to sit her ass down somewhere? Now she has this dark power that can make people do what she wants. I feel like Seria can exorcise that darkness from people bc she did it before, right?? I hope the story starts picking up. I really, really like it and I love when Lina gets put in her place and when everything goes wrong for her, but I need her to be defeated like...YESTERDAY. And I dont mean Seria exorcises her from the darkness and she's all good and everyone forgives her. No, I mean I want her put in a guillotine and.....well, wait is that too much? Anyway, I want her gone. And that child is the child of the devil.
Did Inseo say Yi-Hyeok went TWO WEEKS without talking to him and ignoring him??? Oh hell naw. I think NOT! As a matter of fact, I think THE FUCK not! You're not about to ignore me for two whole weeks. I don't care what arguments we had or whose fault it was. If we're in a relationship and you ignore me for two weeks bc we fought, then I'll consider that as your resignation. Thank you for your services. You are dismissed. We're done. I don't know if yall youngins do things like that nowadays, but my ass is too old for that foolishness. Lol :-P
I can understand the silence and needing to be by yourself for a day or two. Maybe even three days. Four days is pushing it. But fourteen days??? I'm calling and texting and stopping by your house and you're ignoring me for fourteen days? Okay. You must wanna be single then and that's fine with me.
And also, I don't do that whole "I never wanna see/talk to you again!" ordeal, but then two days later, it's like nothing ever happened and we're back together. First of all, you tell me that and you'll fuck around and find out that I granted your wish. You won't see or hear from me again. Second of all, even if I did stay, we have some major talking to do before we let the situation go.
Yi-Hyeok and Inseo are still young. Mistakes happen. Arguments happen. But if they want to have a lasting relationship, this whole "going two weeks without talking" situation is a no-no.
So, I've seen this in a lot of these, but....
In the last chapter, S2Ch13, when Daiki is seeing the kids off to preschool, his head is turned forward, but his eye looked all the way behind him to MC! Why do authors/illustrators do this?? They always have the one eye looking to the side--or in Daiki's case, behind--even though the head is clearly facing forward. I've tried doing this and all that happened was eye pain and a headache. Lol It's so unnatural, but it's in a loooot of stories.
Sooo...of course. It's always gotta be either the step-mother, step/half-sister, grandfather, and or the grandmother that bring the unnecessary foolishness. In this case, it's the grandparents. And the Dad doesnt have a backbone. I'm surprised he's even standing upright.
Those grandparents can go to hell. Actually, they can be swallowed by Leviathan and drown in his stomach acids, then marinate in his bowels, before be shat out in the deepest part of Tartarus. I feel sorry for that little boy, but I won't tolerate anybody hurting Wei Yun and Yutong. The little boy's mother needs to grow the fuck up and accept some responsibilities, whether she likes it or not. And for fuck-all's sake, would the dad please grow some fucking BALLS. Even if they're the size of walnuts, it would be fine. Bc right now them bitches be the size of two Planktons from Bikini Bottom.
Guys, what's with the star candy? Feel like I missed a huge part. Does it keep him from disappearing?
Also, BWAT has such a distinctive art style. You can always tell when it's a story by them.
The FL is annoying. She finds it humiliating that her husband is cheating on her, which I can understand. But it's also as if she's jealous. The man hits and beats her for his sexual enjoyment. BDSM is supposed to be enjoyed by BOTH parties involved. When it's just one enjoying it, it crosses the line and can be seen as a form of abuse. It's a very, very thin line. If I were her, I would team up with Lowell and bring down the husband. Make so he can't shoe his face in society. He can be in the gutter, right along with that skank.
Honestly, Robina should've been locked up after the first time or two of her committing a crime. Why did it take this to get her locked up and why let her go in the beginning anyway? It's as if they were asking for her to try and scheme again. To be frank, she's not a very intelligent and formidable villainess anyway. She reminds me of Plankton from SpongeBob. Over and over doing the same thing, but expecting to come out on top. That's what Robina did in this story. You would've thought, she would up her game each time her plan didn't work, if she was going to continue being a Villainess instead of learning from her mistakes. But nope.
It's like the Author stopped trying and got lazy with Robina's story, and at the last minute, came up with this scheme to get her caught (FINALLY) and put in prison. The author could've brought in someone else bigger and better than Robina that could've given Viola and Ivan a run for their money. I'm not saying I want them to lose. I want them to win, but I feel like Robina's villainy is small pickings compared to Ivan's heroism. He and Viola need a bigger challenge to beat and overcome. ;-)
TL/DR: I enjoyed the story so much and cried at the end. Usually, when the family neglects the FL, I want her to find a way to be better than them and then flip them off and leave, but Legis' redemption was good. I love him now.
Can anyone give me any suggestions of a FL who was done dirty by her family or was neglected by them in her first life and in the second life, she changes so much that they take notice and want to love her? I would love it if she gives them the middle finger and leaves them or gets revenge on them BUT....if they have a good redemption arc, then I'll take those too. I know "Death is the only Ending for the Villainess" and "Actually, I Was the Real One" are two I can think of....
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MY LONGER COMMENT: My dogs are cuddling with me bc I burst into tears during the last chapter. I would love a prequel and see Legis and Amelle's life together, but knowing what's going to happen to her, I wouldn't be able to take it. I think the side stories gave me what I needed in wanting to know about these two.
Ya know...a lotta the times when it comes to stories like this and the FL regressed or someone transmigrates into her body, and her family were assholes in the first life, but try to be nice in the second life, Im always wanting the FL to just say fuck'em and not give a shit about them anymore. Get revenge on them by becoming better, richer, etc. and disappear from their lives. But, with this story, Legis really did turn a 36p. His redemption was good and I love him so much now. I'm so glad that both he and Juvelle got to see Amelle one last time. I was scared for Legis for a moment there and I'm hoping reading Amelle's diary and seeing her gave him peace. He has his daughter and grandbabies to live for now. When his time comes, he'll be able to be with Amelle again.
Can anyone give me any suggestions of a FL who was done dirty by her family or was neglected by them in her first life and in the second life, she changes so much that they take notice and want to love her? I would love it if she gives them the middle finger and leaves them or gets revenge on them BUT....if they have a good redemption arc, then I'll take those too. I know "Death is the only Ending for the Villainess" is one....
Reading the dad is so freaking tiresome, I swear. He's always yelling, therefore I'm yelling out his lines and acting out his feelings in my mind. Reading him is like reading Sanho from Stranger Than Friends by Yeoro and Artist, Sagold. Sanho is constantly yelling that I feel out of breath reading him. In this story, it's the same. As a matter of fact, everyone in this gives me high blood pressure. This whole premise is something I would've read back in the day before fanfiction was known as fanfiction.
Chapters 92--98....*stands and claps* Gah-DAMN. Geeeeezus. I've never been more jealous of two ukes. Lol
I know I should probably finish reading what I have opened in my tabs, but I cant help myself. Here goes....
Does anyone know of any other stories like this where the MC goes back in time or regular girl is isekai'd. And before the family used to hate her or neglect her, but now that shes given another chance for whatever reaaon or regular girl is isekai'd and is acting different than before and aloof or maybe has a backbone, the family sees this and is now wanting her attention and affection and shes like nah, yall can suck my middle finger?
Telling yall now....this is a rant.
TL/DR: Everybody can get slapped in this chapter. Especially the Dad until further notice.
This....this is just wrong. I mean, Tak is an ass and he deserved getting his ass beat, but to get beaten bc he came out as liking another man? His father beat his ass and his mother was asking the brother to do something, while the brother stood there laughing. I get it. Conservative household. I come from a conservative and RELIGIOUS-to-the-max type of household. Its the main reason I dont talk about/be honest about my pansexuality and never will and Im fine with that. Its my choice. But I cant stand seeing something like this. Lost respect for the father for now. Dont care how handsome he is.
And Sanho??? You wanted him to be honest about his feelings and your relationship. Now that he is, youre acting all brand new and weird and shit. YOU GOT WHAT YOU WANTED!!! But youre still yelling?? Even if Tak's confession was surprising and shocking to the point where you had to question if you were in the Twilight Zone. THIS. Is. What. You. Wanted. And. Have. Been. Waiting. For.
Like....I wanted to slap everybody in this chapter. Even the mom. Dont care how conservative of a household we live in, you, as my husband, are not about to beat my child. You want someone to beat on? Fine, beat me. But my CHILD? Yeah, go ahead. Youll wake up with a knife to the throat later on that night. I cant have children bc of an illness, but I found out early on in life that Id be a psycho Mama Bear. I would go hard for my kids. So....its probably for the best I cant have them.
Anyway, yep. Everybody can get slapped in this chapter.
Im holding on guys, but Im honestly just here, waiting for the Boss's sidestory now.