Oh come on, the inside POV of guts holding in the cum??? Come on, give us some fucking finesse. Or plot progress.
That is also anatomically incorrect. The large intestine is not in the center of the belly (they wanna treat rectum as a vag and intestine as an uterus so badly lol). Also it doesn't hold the cum like that, but rather absorbs it, often causing stomach pain or infections, due to not being the usual compound that intestines are made to process. Plus why do they always ignore farting. Like with all that cum there, the person farts a lot as a natural response to get the liquid out.
While i appreciate the educational notion of your comment... Come on man
Why is that blond bitch tweaking all the time? Like godam, someone please give her her dosage.
I'm on ch 11 and reading this has given me flashbacks to time when i worked with autistic kids. Especially the non-verbal autistic boy that was just as absent minded, aggressive, and was not socially adaptable in any way. You guys have no idea how hard it is to take care of such people. So kudos to the mother who accepted this broken soul and who is trying to give her some motherly love. I know this is just a fuction and the FL will probably get better someohow, but man this gave me some trauma.
So, im on chapter 11. I love the art and the premise but... Man oh man it went from 0 to 100 fast. So much backstory, ivory towers, chalises, side characters, theories, inner monologues, i can barely keep up, i need some flow to the story. Will the story telling calm down a bit? Hit some breaks? I'd love to continue to read it, it's intriguing.
yeah, it’s almost like the story has no filler chapters lmao
Not so as filler chapters, but it has been all over the place. Better word is: a lot of exposition.
BAHAHAHAHA the officer with a coffee mug looking at asses all day from screen, i am screaming
When you put it that way
"butterfly, wait for me" omg author pleaaaase, she sounds autistic don't make her dumb please, she's an adult ffs
She is dumb unlike her sisters (friends) she's like a young child. I wouldn't be surprised if she act like that because there is no butterfly under the sea.
Why you conflating autistic with dumb? Also she's a fucking mermaid, grew up under the sea and all that? She had never seen a butterfly until recently so of course it excites her. She's also not human so her behavior is probably "adult" for a mermaid, but not meshing well with human society cuz she's not human.
She's not a kid, nor do her actions show her to be like one. It shows her entirely different upbringing and environment and culture. We can't judge her actions based on a human when she is just learning how humans act and doesn't know what people are really saying to her.
She's cute and all, but why make her as if she has a mind of a five year old??? I mean, she looks adult, she has lived years in the ocean, not in solitude but in a community! She should be aware of social cues, some stories of the human world and how the society works? Okay, intimacy should be foreign to her, as she only speaks to her sisters, but still...
For a moment there i thought she gained a brain cell
Does it have interesting plot? At least some drama?
Yes yes yes very interesting, great art and damn hot mls
Yup, i ate all of the chapters in 1 day. Damn i love them the art is out of this world pretty
I DID THE SAME THE DAY I ANSWERED U GIRL I LOVE THIS NOAH ILYSM SENA FUCK U